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Old 03-11-03, 05:31 PM   #1
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Ya ever feel like nothings goin right? Fight till it hurts so bad and ya bleed, cuz ya need to succeed and plead fo someone to make ur life worth livin- driven, to the point where ya lose it all, your life ya wan end, but luckily ya stall- tryin ta stand tall, but ya got a force to knock ya down, frown wit da fear of the next day of yo life, thinking all that’s gon happen is mo strife- plus ya got dat pain in yo chest like ya been stabbed wit a knife-

feel stranded and drained- enervatin, just waitin for ur time to shine, now u just gon whine, ya don’t listen when they say its gon be fine, cuz they just don’t know- its this pain ya cant let go, don’t matta how much good ya got in yo hood, or if ya know u got a future in store, yo life is now a bore, no one hearin what u sayin, cuz they all busy playin- layin low- makin it in da show- ya working hard to make ur dreams be achieve, but ya conceive- visualizing a life much betta den urs-with no wurries- it seems so scurry, but we all think dis way, we learn to keep those thoughts that burn, down deep in yo soul, then we turn and try to blank out dem thoughts, a piece of u feelin like it still churn, hard ta earn all u’ve been givin, regretin stuff and wonderin how ta be livin, its so tough, cuz the ride through life is rough- ya had enough-

ur souls dyin and to urself and dem u be liein, cryin- when ya got the chance alone, they see u like a stone- so it don’t seem u can break, but all it take’s one mistake- to shake up yo mind- and its so hard to put it all behind- ya cant rewind- just gotta find- the willpower in ya to get by- overcome all those fears, make sure yo end aint near- believe me, we all feel this way, I’m livin life iight, but even I feel like my worlds comin down- overcome by stress, everythin seem to be a mess- the pain in me seem to be trappin- me in, so I just rappin- to make sure I let out the words that eat me alive-

we all gotta strive to do our best, its like a test- if ya gotta strong heart and some courage yo’ll pass, things be movin fast- but you will pull through, dis what ya gotta do---- change the path u be followin- dose fears, ya gotta be swallowin- If you think u got a chance, fall away from yo fearful trance- remember ya always got someone on yo side, makin sure ya make it through yo ride- don’t hide, have faith u gon live yo life wit some bliss, kiss yo problems goodbye till ya die, I’m telling ya, you CAN get by….

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Old 03-12-03, 11:48 AM   #2
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this is more of a poetic script... type of feel...

poetry?
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Old 03-12-03, 02:29 PM   #3
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I like it, not really angry... but it flows nice, good topic and lyrically you covered the main points.. uppin'
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Old 03-12-03, 02:40 PM   #4
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decent... got some talent.. keep this shit comin.. it was hard to read but thats ok.. most people would say dont do it in paragraphs like that... but it dont matter to me.. i thought it was raw...
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