Po’s searchin’, it seems urgent//
Looking for 3 persons, slithery like green serpents//
They step on the block with thieves lurkin’ and fiends thirstin’//
For the hourly cocaine or weed servin’//
Now these 3 persons are nothing but wee urchins//
But steel’s bursting, cop is hit in his sleeve shirt, as he leans cursin’//
C-O-P’s working to close the wound and keep searching//
For these kids who just ran quick with knees jerkin’//
Reinforcements keep lurching and the teens heard it//
Ganja leaf yearnin’, got their chest wheeze burnin’//
Can’t breath certain, as they rest in alley garbage ways//
This is where having street knowledge pays//
They think they’ve got away, but cops only a block away//
Cock and spray, shot a stray, how long can they dodge and play?//
The kids run up in the house where mobster's stay, askin’ to be lodged away//
But not today, the mobs got a new shipment comin’ off the bay//
So the kids leave and lock the gate as the sun’s going down//
Lookin’ for a hideout all over town//
Plus the chrome and pound needs to reload a round//
Stomach croaking sounds, they pull the holsters out//
But then grows a crowd, police pin the kid's shoulders down//
Guns to their dome and mouth, as they're read their spoken vows//
Rights to remain silent as they hold ‘em down//
Young offenders get thrown in the deepest hole in town//

that was dope... nice finish...
"But then grows a crowd, police pin the kid's shoulders down//
Guns to their dome and mouth, as they're read their spoken vows//
Rights to remain silent as they hold ‘em down//
Young offenders get thrown in the deepest hole in town//"
much respect for that... keep rhymin

nice piece....

like the flow to it ...you stood consistent with it..and it payed off..

nice structured verse...

the topic matched the lyrics...but it really didn't get into depth of the story...

but it was dope..i liked it.

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G.I. JOE

Thanks for the ups... keep comin' with the thoughts.

Don't sleep on the thread!!!

wow JUST SICK WIT IT MAN ALL THE PROPS TO YO ENIG

PS: PEEP MY SHIT CALLED LIFE'S DRAMA'S

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i was walkin through the ghetto one fine afternoon,
when dashiki came over, asked me what im doin,
"gotta party tonight and its gonna be tight"
dis bitch is fine, so i said alright
its startin at six and its now half five,
half an hour to go, i might go for a drive,
when some nigga came up and started givin me jive,
ah said yo look man theres this party at six,
it gonna be full of hoes jus lookin for dicks,
so come along, have a smoke on ma bong,

anybody think where to go with this

^^??wtf

yo dis verse had a ill content.Serious story-tellin there.I loved it,start to finish no doubt.Multis wuz frickin crazy sh!t wuz all ova tha place.To0o0o0o0o0o0o sick.Stay ^
-Avi

note:u and 13th should do a collab,now DAT would be ill

Good lookin' out on the uppin' y'all. I 'preciate the comments...

yo nice spit dog,stayed on topic all the way through,its good to see somone come with a concept and stick to it instead of just rhymin words it was a story keep doin your thing.1