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Old 03-13-03, 11:56 AM   #1
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just a flow

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juss a lil flow

As my life gets worse,
I feel more and more like ridden in a hurse
What did I do to deserve this curse?
It's my life that I wanna disperse
Im so sick of the pain,
Everything in my world feeling like rain
All I feel is utter distain,
I'm trapped in this world and going insane.
There is nobody around to hear me cry,
There's gonna be nobody there when I die
I give up on everything cuz I don't wanna try,
What can I do to make the pain pass bye?
Why does god do this to me?
This hurt is all I can see
I feel so empty,
I feel like a branchless tree
Everyday a tear falls down my cheek,
I look at the future and it seems so bleak
I can't deal with it anymore I'm getting weak,
And death is all I seek
It's been to long since I seen daylight,
Cuz everyday im in a constant fight
And when I think it's possible I might,
I remember that I'm never right
God take this pain away,
For me there is no brighter day
All there is left to say,
Is now my coffin is where I lay.
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Old 03-13-03, 12:02 PM   #2
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all i can say is listen to ---'Tupac'- 'Keep ya head up'......

Nice verse but it aint as bad as u think, i been through alotta shit n ive got through, may-b u gotta stop thinkin about the problems n start thinkin about the soloutions?.......

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Old 03-13-03, 12:25 PM   #3
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nice peice deep, yeh shit does happen dat y we write bout it n i think writtin bout wots goin on is a way of dealin wit it,gettin ova it coz u feel like ur got it off ur chest. feelin dis GrAn THeF
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Old 03-13-03, 12:51 PM   #4
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That shit is deep and its tight. Ii have been through many tough times and i have made it through and i think you can to. I am not sayin i know how u feel because i dont know what u have to deal wit. Just look to another day and let it pass. Writtin helps me alot and hanging wit the people who bring me up not down. I am lookin forward to readin ur next piece. I'm out. Peace
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Old 03-13-03, 12:59 PM   #5
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This is y i write cuz it helps wid shit makes me feel good to get shit out, thanxz for the replies
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