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Old 03-13-03, 06:43 AM   #1
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Total Fiction

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Believe shit da u see in tv; learn and read books fo no need//

Its like you cant be thought truthfully, being lied reapetedly//

Cant you smell da shit in da sea, all over is da reality//

Money hungry demons controlling minds to close blinds//

Lies being covered wit dirt , hidden landmines //

Explode on time; Dont know why i ride this rolla costa//

Must be da life of this atmosphere coming closa//

I gotta live what i'm suppose ta be, Imating tv //

twenty first century looking da samy way to me//

nothing has changed, so i look at da pictures on da page///

Fucking mainstream got me scream like rage against da machine//

Fuck anyone who talk about my masterpiece dream/
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Old 03-13-03, 08:22 AM   #2
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good concept... alright flow... might wanna expand your vocab but otherwise... good work... keep rhymin
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