yea rules

10 bar min 32 bar max
verses up by Saturday night
lets go


yo
could u picture me on ya block with to big glocks
holdin 21 shots ya blood leakin in my socks/
i got ya face long dont i u lookin in my face wrong
u mess with me i'll leave a whole fraction of ya face gone/
i smother this cat like maranara
cuz if u pitched for the "taliban" u still couldnt strike terror/
i gotta enough heat to make ya whole block melt
make u feel the same pain that biggie fifty and 2pac felt/
i get this nigga quicker and harder than an adolescant erection
and bust u ten times faster than your dsl connection/
if i spt three rhymes 27 bars like the shots in three nines
gangsta u couldnt come raw if u were circumsized 3 times/
i'll bring it to this ni99a hard like a j-lo poster
bring this lyrical beast down like a african safari poacher/
man u couldnt even beat me with lotion
when i come with that ak ya whole block start to scatter like roaches/
if u mess with me i'll sell ya body parts on ebay
it could be roy jones and john ruiz on instant replay/
im demolishin this man u undefeated im stoppin this man
dog u couldnt beat me even if i put my cock in yahand/

get up

a yo gangsta if u online why dont u go ahead and drop ya lyrica

LOL aight playa ama drop mine rite now.............

Yo Kido listen up i ain't "chinese", but this "Criminal still gonna get ate", I hit this "fag" with clip that'll make his brain shift, so he think "straight"/
only reason Criminal fag would be happy to go to "prison" is to be with "in-mates"/
you ain't spitten i just see drool dribbling off your lip it's like i'm playing "jump rope with your organs" the way i made your "heart skip"/
Aint no blastin-me you just anotha dead 'waCk- emcee', victim of Lg'S 'catastrophe/
I aim to annihilate I'm holdin dis verse out so you'll Die-late/
Next time ya step up to da 'plate', ya betta come wit betta words ta conjagate/
You juss a lightweight wit a lyrical knife stuck in ya face and no 'way' ta 'elevate/
So before you 'cry just think Why-oh-why", did I choose ta test dis 'guy'?/
I'm just leavin abrivasion you reputation wont eva be accepted by da Rap battles damn what a Humuliation/
I'm like an equation you cant pass dis test, wit ya heart racin
So ya start erasin all ballz shrivel, to da size of a raisin/
Lil kid my hot flow willl leave you sense-less with a lyrical death wish/
i rep this bitch you getting played out like a game of genesis/
To much complexity for yaa I stay rappin wit an Encripted Mind...this fool gotta be Supa ugly cuz If u were an ILL Magician Thats The only time ya tricks-be-Fine/ (HaHa).....
~Swith Style~

SOn betta"watch ya mouth ni99a, you dont want me 2 put a hit out on you-
and have you walkin around wit another R.I.P tag-too-
fuck VA, come 2 Cali and see if u wont get killed out here-
You think you invincible, wake up even superman is on a wheelchair-
You wanna slam mine? Nah Kid I Get Gutta With Man-Kind..
And By The Im Kickin Ya Ass Right Now U Can Tell Man-Aint-Kind-

Enuff VOTESSSSSSSSSSSS NEEEEEEEEDED...

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UPPUN ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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LG liked u better in this battle u get my vote

1-0

lyrical Gangsta we uppin

Good Battle,
Criminal i liked your verse but LG was just too much in my view. Keep workin at it playa
vote=LG

aight2-0 gangsta dont let me get shut out

LOL criminal man u got bigger battle to worry about honey u vs Micdarell.....Pinkslip shit rite....go hard on him...lol

Yo thnx for the 2 voters
0-2 one more fo KO

Criminal Nice battle homey

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ma vote goes to LG better verse overall n just he came wit harder punches and disses aight holla bak 1

damn first battle on the site and i lost