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Old 07-24-03, 10:23 AM   #1
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LIFEs LIGHT (completed version! peep!)

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LIFEs LIGHT!

FIRST VERSE

i got the emotion buildin up inside, wiv the thought of a deal bein up n signed/
body shakin as I put pen 2 paper, obscene flava in my mouth, worryin n feelin more transparent than water vapour/
comensin further in a career in music, fear i'll loose it, fear money will be a catalyst 2 abuse it/
will I confuse it wiv bitches n fame, the aim of the game to stay off the windin confayer belt 2 present pain/
first album comin how will the public react, infact is there a risk of bein sacked wiv negative impact/
feedback always important from fellow artists, clense my fists, take any critasism on the chin n make a list/
to improve on a future track, don't step back, don't make it wack but avoid every obsticle which comes wiv the pack/
day by day pictures will appear wiv new visions, but wiv gud visions comes hard desisions/
life changing moments, dents in ya reputation n appearance, dodge bullets n gain respect 2 increase ya inheritance/
the games a risk, people say rappers must av flipped a disk/
cos in away hip hops like walkin the green mile, every G got a different style, so beef n confrontation cud begin 2 pile/
man walkin the streets wiv a vest ain't ideal but we love it, its r life 2 rise above it, r chest is a target so we cover it/
Smuther it wiv overwhelmin protection, which cud be the difference between life, or need of resurrection/
man im there i've made it 2 the light, alright its been a struggle but it was never out of sight//


SECOND VERSE


First spotted by producer battlin on rb, saw me takin the heat 2 a fuckin newbie/
Screw me this ain’t a joke, will I cope cos the thought of an album is too much 2 gulp/
All in one go but I’ll find away, to get away, from the media hipe to see my fami-lay/

Hours spent practicing finally payed off, like my bills which have now strayed off,-- I cough/
N im on the front page, not bout my talent on stage, but the xplicit lyrics bein kicked by someone of my age/
But me, I love it all, its much appreciated, that anyone will even look twice a one time bum whos just elevated/
Its complicated, my life, livin its like walkin on the edge of a knife/
Success on one side n the gutter-on-the-other, walk down the streets wiv strangers callin u brother/
Brother im more like ya father cos I fucked ya mother/
Another problem n im trippin, rippin heads off niggas 4 dippin---/
---down, bitch get off my dick I don’t know u, your just another herb man I grow u, u neva liked me wen I was poor like u/
so like you, I don’t don’t like you, without self belief theres no lifes light for you/
u gotta believe, believe n receive want you deserve, then you’ll be like me, able to eat in a restaurant wivout any reserve/
for all its lows man theres many highs, askin yourself why? The old me had to disappear n die/
cos no matter wot y’all think its way from the truth, cherish ya youth, cos if ya make it big the old yous history, old news, n im the proof//
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Old 07-24-03, 12:41 PM   #2
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come on y'all don't sleep on this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uppin!1
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Old 07-25-03, 10:05 AM   #3
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come on y'all need some feedback, thanx

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-25-03, 01:59 PM   #4
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Good shit man we all feelin that inner struggle and the pain from frustration when we cant make it and get stuck ya know!!!!!!!
keep it up dwg!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-25-03, 02:00 PM   #5
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I like the flow on this piece it was simplistic but tight...You keepin it real..holla
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Old 07-28-03, 07:15 AM   #6
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thanx

more feedback please!
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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