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03-04-03, 02:19 AM | #1 | |||||||
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another wack love rap
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Inspire, that cat sitting in the corner of the partys just rhyming to himself,
in his own mind he owns the heavyweight title belt, its heart felt, he has yet to be defeated by another rapper, he turns their flow off simple as a clapper, He's only been defeated one time, cant get the feeling out of his rhyme, used to have a princess that ran away, she wasnt feeling the messages shootin her way, he'd give anything to have her back, without her his flow feels 10 times as wack, it's been almost a year in his mind, wondering if she was going to be back another time, but shes out flaunting her new lover, sometimes he wishes he could just smother, his mother and his brother with his rhymebook cover, her new loves not showin respect, hes got her in a death grip around the neck, he trys to get all his feelings out onto the paper, Inspire cant deal with another love caper, like a superhero coming to save the day, only he got hit by a bus cause he was looking the wrong way, love is complicated, overrated, out-dated, but you still cant fade it, the most complex emotion this emcee has ever felt, he'd trade it all for it including the heavyweight title belt, love is priceless though, he knows, he'll never get her back with his flow, or lots of dough, its hard for inspire to rhyme about his one true love, a girl so sweet and elegant like a white dove, he cant find anyone that even compares, and that scares, an emcee like him, his search for true love is getting grim, out of the darkness comes a new love, she too in his mind is elegant as a turtle dove, they get to talking and he falls in love once again, the other girl fades back in the shadows where she began, the new girl heals his wounds, love his tunes, someday he thinks they'll be bride and groom, times get hard and he wonders what he saw in this new tart, she quickly leaves him back at at the start, Inspire still dreaming about that original girl, the one that he'd die for, give the world, shes still out there with her new love, its katie, inspires lost turtle dove.... |
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03-04-03, 02:20 AM | #2 | |||||||
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better than the last posts? let me know what ya'll think
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03-04-03, 02:53 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Yo, Inspire, that shit is heart felt man, meaningfull and deep rhymes there, thats nice man, keep it up!
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03-04-03, 04:06 PM | #4 | ||||||
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dat rhyme wuz tight. at first i didn't see da rhymes but i see now. shit wuz deep. keep doing yo thang dawg. ONE!!
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03-04-03, 04:19 PM | #5 | ||||||
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yo dis wuz a ill-ass piece.i can undastand where u comin from too.Love iz complicated in more ways than one.Piece had evythang,hope to see more from ya.Stay ^
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03-05-03, 01:22 AM | #6 | |||||||
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thanks for the good reviews ya'll... dont sleep on my boy meadskillz... everyone on here needs to check his rhymes out, much love again for the reviews... keep rhymin
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03-05-03, 01:31 AM | #7 | ||||||
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that whole verse was ill and deep. it seemed like ever line had tons of feeling in it to. keep this shit flowing!
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03-31-03, 04:52 AM | #8 | ||||||
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thats what i'm taking bout, good shit inspire, keep em comin
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