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Old 03-26-03, 01:43 AM   #1
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Venting some

IP: CEA7 CFFA

Ryan, you're a faggot
I'll take your head and bag it
Snuff you with a hatchet
Stuff you in a chest and latch it
A tisket, a tasket
You just got your ass kicked
Watch you leak from your gasket
Splotch some blood till you lack it
No mercy so don't ask it
How's it smell in your casket?
Your head looks flat when I whack it
Put your toes in a basket
Frame your nose and then tack it
Teeth in rows, strike a match quick
Smoking prick when your sack's lit
Choking sick, should've thought twice
Wait a tick...turns out I'm not so nice
Touch my girl, get burned with hot rice
When you hurl you'll learn the bought price
Catch my flak, rat...I'll catch mice
Rip your hair out...you've got lice
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Old 03-26-03, 02:27 AM   #2
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IP: 5153 3B92

Smoking prick when your sack's lit

Rip your hair out...you've got lice

This shit is just funny to me! This is the kind of humor I look for in a freestyle. Spoken freestyle...
So I hope this is a right quick keystyle. It entertained me, so I think the technical criticisms are unworthy here. I don't want to see: "up yo vocab dawg!" Some of the lines were weak, but... fuck it. I don't care. It must be late.
Peace.
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