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Old 03-25-03, 11:49 AM   #1
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Power of da dick

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I've been going wit this nigga, let's say a minute//
I'ma tell you how this nigga made his way up in it//
At first I thought he was all hype, you know, showing off//
I was scared like a mug I said turn ya head and cough//
He thought I was playing and gave me a little smile//
Ya kno ladies that one that turns you on and makes you go wild//
I didn't want to seem so fast so I went his pace//
Thinking what move I should assume, his d***, or his face//
Nah slow down I thought you got all day why move so fast//
He whipped it out and I might say, it was hard as a cast//
Oh my, I was quite impress but somewhat unsure//
This nigga was panting like he was sick and needed a cure//
What's wrong I asked, is this to good for you//
He shook his slowly and asked "For you what can I do"//
Now this nigga done everything he could to get my attention//
"Lead me to your room and I'll follow your direction"//
On the bed or the floor I was wondering in my head//
"I want you like crazy yo I want you badly"is all he said//
Now ladies we kno those words don't mean shit to us//
"Close you eyes and I promise you won't have a fuss"//
Being all happy and shook over the ass he saw//
This nigga didn't kno what he was in for I was having a ball//
I made him feel like his dick was 10 sizes bigger//
Knowing it was 5 sizes smaller but who figures//
Standing at attention like a soldier ready for the war//
I jumped this nigga bones making him feel good but sore//
I thought he could handle it cuz like a big boi he was holding on//
Before I knew it this nigga came, this shit didn't last that long//
I turned around to see what was this nigga's deal//
All he could say was "baby, so how did it feel?//
You must be joking tell me this shit ain't all of it//
Looking at me funny I was bout to have a fit//
Niggas if you claim you know how to lay the pipe//
Make sure you for reals and you ain't playing hype//
Cuz if we ladies see you were full of the bullshit//
We will tell every nigga we kno "YOU CAN"T HIT"//
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Old 03-25-03, 02:30 PM   #2
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the flow was there and constant though the whole peice the rhyming words coulda been a bit more complex but overall it was a pretty good peice you stayed on topic pretty good too.
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