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03-23-03, 08:51 PM | #1 | |||||||
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quick 1 off da dome
IP: D4DD 11EF
now in dayz u can find many lackin talent to mc..
if u wanna become one, u need to be me.. i'mma tell you like a nicca told me, "you want be alive when you realize death becomse reality.. to all my G's, if u make it can ya picture livin happily.. loungin in paradise fo enternalty.. fack dat shyt, i rather shoot dice smoke green and guzzle hennesy.. and black-out with the burner whenever i'm surrounded by niccaz dats not feelin me../ my whole life, i wuz label as da baddest.. beatin neighbor hood kids up while i take their peanutter butter snacks and their lil cabbage.. i wuz far from a bully, more like a savage.. circiling eyes leaving guys with cotton patches.. mamma always grabbin da leather, going at me.. i used my foot ball moves to dodge ass-whoopin and talk shyt while i'm runnin rappidly.. pants saggin ass showin screamin you cant catch me!.. but eventually she got me..can u belive she came to my school and smack me..every body wuz there, laughin at me.. but can u believe i beated every body who laughed at me../ i got kicked out of skool, and mamma always said to me what about ur dreams of becomnnin a star.. i ignored her, she kicked me out too.. so i started living in cars.. sold crack to the D's and got hit with the bars.. late-night i used to hit da cell mates off with nice rap bars.. and after i always used to finish my flow, they replied saying "nicca fo you, success and dat far".. i came back with g-english and said "my life to real to become a rap star" they laughed and tripped until they felt to sleep in their bonkers like dawgs/ the day dem gates open dats when da reality hit me.. "eight-balls down south going fo fifthy".. plus aint had no clothes to pack, so i hitted down Carolina quickly.. and hooked up with my OG aunt "Missy".. soon as i land to my destination, i bust threw da door saying did you miss me.. "yeah i do, but cut dat net shyt off cuz dat shyt fo real g-files aint trustworthy/ Last edited by De Niro : 03-23-03 at 08:55 PM. |
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03-24-03, 12:31 AM | #2 | |||||||
..terror walks again..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
computer mess up: go to next post
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03-24-03, 12:34 AM | #3 | |||||||
..terror walks again..
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IP: 4577 CD9A
this was sik for a free write. the first 2 verses had a great element of irony switching school drama into straight comedy. the second 2 verses i was feeln as much as the first 2. the flow broke with more serious note in ya wordplay, but at the same time it reminded me of a biggie song. so either or stay up and stay evolvin. if ya got time return the favor.
peace stay up
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