aight, at least 6 bars, you got 24 hours to respond






ah yo,
look deception

you stepped to me thinkin you wont lose, i won't make any exception
i'm bout to get at you and teach you lesson{{

some one get him a doctor, its really very critical
i beat him up with rhymes, it never got physical{{

you beat me? thats just cynical
if you won, that would be cataphysical{{

in case you're wondering, that means unnatural
like if i cut you up with fork, then ate you with a scalpel{{

i'm sick of you thug wannabe's, thinkin you can step up and flow
here, take notes, i'll even s....p.....i...t in slow-mo{{

i got to give you credit, you comin to me, shows you got heart
to bad i got to rip it out your chest, and tear it apart{{

my rhymes are killin, yours soud like a wet fart
you couldn't come up hot, if you changed your name to pop-tart{{

heh,
now i'm just gettin silly with it cause you ain't nothin
you said you wanted to battle, but hey, i know you bluffin{{

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he dicked that bitch down

I'm just fuckin with ya deception
I didn't see how you comin yet

chameleon, i'm glad that you feelin me and all, but i want you next, i'll at ya tommorow

hahaha!!!!!!!!!

????

hahaha!!!!!!!!!

uhh someone wanna tell this wanna be nigga that I aint a bro?
and the only thing slow mo, is his brain when he thinks this is quid pro quo
In case YOUR wondering, that means an equal exchange
seems when they were handing out brains....you got shortchanged
and why the fuck are your lines so far apart?
your rhymes don't need recovery time, they read like a flow chart
all mixed up, confused...roundin second to first
and slidin ya in between my legs, tongue out and head first
see, you claimed your shits something I'd shy away from
and in the end all you got was a mouthful of cum

Aight fuckin wack battle, But someones gotta win,
And I'm gonna give this one to Deception coz he had more flow and 2hype2bwhite your rhyme was ok but it seemed pre-writen an we dont like that in here!!!

Flow and Punches in both rhymes where poor, but deception edged it. Elevate both of you

Vote=Deception,,

Pz

deception's a she not a he

just clarifyin

ARE YOU SERIOUS????? YOU THINK THIS WACK BITCH BEAT ME?
YOU ARE CRAZY IN YOUR DOME PIECE. you say that the rhyming and punchlines are poor, but you also said that mine were written. don't you think if it was written, it would of been real hot??? i swear that is a freestyle, i write way better than that....

oh yeah, shit on you niggas i don't give a fuck if you feelin me or not, i do this for myself.......so.....FUCK YOU

no one cares if deception is a he or she, I SERVE everyone, i don't discriminate

uh...he did. He destroyed you.

"seems when they were handing out brains....you got shortchanged"
"and slidin ya in between my legs, tongue out and head first"

...as for you...no quote....but here's a piece of advice. Don't think so highly of yourself. Your not that good, learn from people, that way you can be better.

I AM A GIRL. FUCK PEOPLE. GET THE SHIT STRAIGHT.

(even though I love ya for voting for me *smiles sweetly*)

yo 2hype fuk that fool he thinkz he summin special...everyone think hes got his hed up his ass...ne ways i dont think ya shit was pre written-but i do have 2 agree wit dat fool dat Dec had better flow...so i give it 2 my brother...sister...lol

VOTE=Deception