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yeah i stole this concept off tupac and the album "all eyes on me", so shoot me i thought it was a cool idea.

i heard your first time was at 14/
i guess you must've been sore when you became a whore-queen/
i watched you from a distance cursing like a truck driver/
the furthest thing from a lady, fellas all up inside-ya/
in fact, i almost felt a twang of guilt/
i heard your pops would let you play to you hilt full tilt/
passing condoms to the new man, telling him to take-care/
like he was your pimp, thats a tough break-there/
its not your fault that your minds so slow/
and karma caught up to you with time you know/
i think you were 15 when we heard the news/
you were knocked up by some fool, guess it was due/
so what then? you dropped out, hit the dole, got a house/
put a ring on your finger and got you a spouse/
your foul mouths still running and your heads still thick/
and you wonder why they call you bitch.....

you was a good friend, had my back til the end/
someone on who i could depend/
remember when you hit me for no reason, you were scheming/
i beat you til you were bearly breathing/
little bitch, still talking about me? faggot, shout-me/
i put this into words in case you doubt me/
see, i can sort out all the men from bitches/
and you little scrawny fuck always had me suspicious/
kid, you on the pull more than milk-maids, am i missin something?/
bet theres skeletons in your cloest, in the night bumpin'/
you desperate to be humpin', in fact its disgusting/
i see the ugly chicks you approaching and hoping/
they expose your facade like "oh my god"/
"we was grindin' on the dancefloor, he still aint hard"/
in fact, i'll just get you a dress, you can perform the switch/
and you wonder why i call you bitch.../

unfinished, feedback?