Finally got it finished! Srry abouyt the wait, i wrote to this title 3 times, I liked this one the best....
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(Girl singing "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star")

Verse One- "The Story"
the relationship was strong, but the love was oddly fable;
she was 10 years younger than him, he robbed the cradle;
and stole everything her mother had, she said it all was dangerous;
but it's not him thats killing Rose.......all his anger is;
his emotions were charred, her skin was porcelin white;
he kept her locked in the house, it forced her to fight;
divorce was the right, road to take, but she missed the turn;
everytime she spoke against him? Threats of slits and burns;
she bottled up her emotions, and lived in a cage;
found relief in heroin...but still was vented through rage;
she couldn't hit josh, so she beat her kids every day;
soon she snapped and fell further: life begins to decay;
blood flowed as the liters were drank, Rose was the leader;
she had to win the battle, but she ws hopeless and feeble;
so Rose bleeched the woredrobe: burnt holes in his sneakers;
Josh came home, noticed the burnt cloths and then beat her;
the children had their faces covered, ballin their eyes out;
he stopped pumeling her, she started crawling: the knife's out;
she wipes her face, stabs him in the back, and kissed her kids;
and with a swift motion from left to right....she slits her wrist;

(*Hook 2x*)

Verse two- "The Letter"
"Age?"
"22...so young, a heart of gold was her treasure;
such a tormented soul was Rose, she wrote us this letter";
the officer paused for a minute, stalled and emraced it;
each attempted syllable shattered apon their creation;

"I'm at the depths of dispair, and damn it, i'm bored;
ominous creatures test me, so i brandish the sword;
i'll extirpate those that oppose the movement of me;
the union of kings, to destroy illusions of peace;
my dreams are painted in black, by my somber emotions;
so many tears shed, now i'm the God of these oceans;
cast into eternal darkness: obnoxious, corrosive;
odd consequinces of my squalid devotions;
quandary, hopeless: such a devious rancor;
running from the dog-like creatures on all fours;
no where to hide, i found safty in a motion to slice;
such a loved child........such a potent demise;
wrap up my injuries, and placate my wounds;
when i found out love was a lie, i tried to fathom the truth;
but couldn't, the taste of defeat in acrid, i'm meak but elated;
i'm choking of anger, cause i'm hanging by a wreath made of hatred";

"the letter was not finished, we're guessing the husband found her;
read it, and begun to hurt her, what a goddamn fucking coward;
rest in peace Josh Wallace, you should've let Rose alone;
the 8th million corpses left by a broken home;
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*No hook yet, can't approach it correctly*

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