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Old 03-29-03, 12:43 AM   #1
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unlike u niggaz i'm true to my team/
i got niggaz out here aint true to their self/
thats why u make records to sell but they stay on the shelf/
u gaining money from hustlin u aint rappin no wealth/
i'll take your name and spread it like a outbreak disease/
and u still wont see sales like a pento lease/
niggaz is actin out gottem druling and shit/
i spit hard an stirdy like an afro pick/
u wont see me let off of my clip/
til its empty and out of order like your allowance was spent/
im checkin up on ya like i was a family member/
i'ma take ya life away like toys from christmas/
i aint have to rhyme i'll choose another profession/
but i chose and aint no time for second guessin/
i crosstrain like nike so i can stay in shape/
i piss niggaz off like the R.kelly tape/
i do bits and fragments u can tell by the pieces/
i choose different ways to kill like i'm eatin a resees/
i get on this mic and spill out shit like dog fecies/
spit fire and singe niggaz hair like kemo therapy/
cause i have more ice than a rasberry slurpy/
yall got me spittin dirty and im tryin to stay clean/
u biting my shit so hard im a call u a feen/
some of yall rhymes is immature like a highschool teen/
streets is hot and niggaz too stingy to cop shit/
i gotta find ways to spit rockets like battleships/
and im full of words to say like i'm notin from subscripts/
my words cut and have u spittin blood like field tics/
yall aint ready for me i'm difficult like math terms/
i ready to spit nasty like i was coughin out flu germs/
i sell underground records and they'll call me an earth worm/
i'm like a lawyer but i work for all firms/
my theories so hot it can make retards learn/
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Old 03-29-03, 05:03 AM   #2
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this was aight. but alot the time it just diddnt flow or rhyme. i see wat u were tryin to do wiv it but u diddnt execute it aswell as other times. e.g.

til its empty and out of order like your allowance was spent/
im checkin up on ya like i was a family member/
i'ma take ya life away like toys from christmas/

wheres the rhyme in those lines i couldnt find any. anyway i aint hatin this isnt a bad piece. ya vocab was quite good when it did rhyme and ya topic has got a point. anyway not hatin check mine shinobi life aight peace
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