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Old 09-27-03, 04:16 AM   #1
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Guessing Game (SS preseason)

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am I dead or just high...I can't really decide...
feelin' deprived of nutrition while my inner entity fliez...
doez my girl really love me or is she after my cash...
am I really the only nigga that gets to be tappin' that ass...
I break down like captionz and glass...
pause my life as I take time to ponder upon this dancer'z reflection...
sometimez I wonder in this world if there could be more answerz than questionz...
I can't find direction...there seemz to be a fork in the road...
I stick it in my heart just to see how short my life goez...
why was I born...what the fuck was my purpose in life...
why am I speaking to my friendz when only angry wordz will suffice...
why did my life turn out to be such a catastrophe...
why is the only light at the end of the tunnel a cop's flashlight that's chasing after me...
why do I still have worriez and doubts on my mind...
why do I continue to try to climb the eternal mountain of time...
why on earth was I placed on this ground...
where vibrationz are made by scientific equationz of sound...
I contain a hate that's profound...
a deep hatred for life as a whole...
that's why I can slit my veinz and drink my ice when it's cold...
but why though...why the fuck am I stuck in this world...
wondering if I'm the only man here that's fuckin' this girlz...
am I a bad father because on occasion I'm slappin' my son...
will I still be stranded on this planet when the final rapture has come...
I hope my death will be slow cause hopefully my life will be fast...
at night I say my prayerz to see if God answerz any of the questionz that I have rightfully asked...

this was from the SS preseason battle I had against Evolve...

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Old 09-27-03, 05:05 AM   #2
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tightness twin i want to see how it ends up
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Old 09-28-03, 04:03 AM   #3
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damn it kidz...uppin'...
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Old 09-29-03, 03:30 AM   #4
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still uppin'...
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Old 09-29-03, 03:42 AM   #5
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LICK MY WEBBO PRODUCTION PRESENTS:OMEN OF THE ICON~O~CLAST
PEEP THAT POST IT IS FOR THE FAM I THINK SOME OF MY BEST WORK
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Old 09-29-03, 03:55 AM   #6
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That was deep. I was feeling that one too. It was floetic, it had a nice flow to it. "I hope my death will be slow cause hopefully my life will be fast" I liked that line the best, that was ill. Good drop.
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Old 09-29-03, 04:07 AM   #7
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^^^lol...she likez me...
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Old 09-30-03, 12:15 AM   #8
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all the WHY WHY WHY got kinda repetative
but before i start tellin ur weakness in this
but this is a really dope conept and orignal
apporach to this, i give u props for that.....

didnt flow at all,
bar structre was weak
didnt fit well at alll
this would be really
dope if u re wrote it all
to make it actually flow properly
and to make it a decent piece
i mean u got a dope idea
just use it properly mate
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Old 09-30-03, 01:07 AM   #9
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^^^lol...I alwayz knew you was a heter...just about every open mic you replied in you was hatin'... it flowz perfectly...and by the way...I beat Evolve with this piece so it can't be that bad...
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