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09-27-03, 04:16 AM
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Guessing Game (SS preseason)
IP: 4779 5259
am I dead or just high...I can't really decide...
feelin' deprived of nutrition while my inner entity fliez... doez my girl really love me or is she after my cash... am I really the only nigga that gets to be tappin' that ass... I break down like captionz and glass... pause my life as I take time to ponder upon this dancer'z reflection... sometimez I wonder in this world if there could be more answerz than questionz... I can't find direction...there seemz to be a fork in the road... I stick it in my heart just to see how short my life goez... why was I born...what the fuck was my purpose in life... why am I speaking to my friendz when only angry wordz will suffice... why did my life turn out to be such a catastrophe... why is the only light at the end of the tunnel a cop's flashlight that's chasing after me... why do I still have worriez and doubts on my mind... why do I continue to try to climb the eternal mountain of time... why on earth was I placed on this ground... where vibrationz are made by scientific equationz of sound... I contain a hate that's profound... a deep hatred for life as a whole... that's why I can slit my veinz and drink my ice when it's cold... but why though...why the fuck am I stuck in this world... wondering if I'm the only man here that's fuckin' this girlz... am I a bad father because on occasion I'm slappin' my son... will I still be stranded on this planet when the final rapture has come... I hope my death will be slow cause hopefully my life will be fast... at night I say my prayerz to see if God answerz any of the questionz that I have rightfully asked... this was from the SS preseason battle I had against Evolve... Last edited by King of Thievez : 09-27-03 at 05:07 AM. |
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09-27-03, 05:05 AM
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IP: 19AF 50C1
tightness twin i want to see how it ends up
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09-28-03, 04:03 AM
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IP: 399E F0FD
damn it kidz...uppin'...
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09-29-03, 03:30 AM
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IP: 4427 437B
still uppin'...
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09-29-03, 03:42 AM
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IP: 19AF 50C1
LICK MY WEBBO PRODUCTION PRESENTS:OMEN OF THE ICON~O~CLAST
PEEP THAT POST IT IS FOR THE FAM I THINK SOME OF MY BEST WORK |
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09-29-03, 03:55 AM
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IP: F19F D969
That was deep. I was feeling that one too. It was floetic, it had a nice flow to it. "I hope my death will be slow cause hopefully my life will be fast" I liked that line the best, that was ill. Good drop.
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09-29-03, 04:07 AM
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IP: 4427 437B
^^^lol...she likez me...
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09-30-03, 12:15 AM
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IP: 1501 77A0
all the WHY WHY WHY got kinda repetative
but before i start tellin ur weakness in this but this is a really dope conept and orignal apporach to this, i give u props for that..... didnt flow at all, bar structre was weak didnt fit well at alll this would be really dope if u re wrote it all to make it actually flow properly and to make it a decent piece i mean u got a dope idea just use it properly mate |
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09-30-03, 01:07 AM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
^^^lol...I alwayz knew you was a heter...just about every open mic you replied in you was hatin'... it flowz perfectly...and by the way...I beat Evolve with this piece so it can't be that bad...
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