Just some sit I dd right here at the computer..shit I been thinkin' about gotta get it out like a quick fart...
look-a-here, yo..

I represent the minority of the population
that dominate the majority of these poppy stations/
my culture has taken over, while the makers days are over
ain't no pention in hip-hop so they back to the days before hits../
and this is shit thats ment to print to the lives of the urban
but turned to hits for chicks thats in the drive to be yearnd in../
the hood, I ain't sayin don't do this shit,
just be true to dudes that blow so you can groove and spit/
now that it's off my chest, my bench press in often less
popin' off rhymes is my theropy, disolves the stress/
if it ain't one thang it's another , as I recall whats next/
my swiming in contradictory, recover all in steps/
Step 1, don't procrastinate ration of positive action made
if I don't do the proper ground work don't look for the accolades/
Step 2, don't dispite certain groups off ignoance and sheer dislike
dispite them for they actions to purposly detere my rights/
Step 3, learn to expect the edge while livin' the norm
take heart in being a black man in peace but a nigga at war/

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^^ damn ya'll

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"popin' off rhymes is my theropy, disolves the stress", very true... shit does helf when mad bored or stressed out, I really felt that line... yo D, for a keystyle this was pretty good man... I was definitely feeling what you was saing here, shit was quick and to the point... you was flowing pretty nicely here too...

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nice shit D.. I was feelin' most what you were say'n in this piece..
"Step 2, don't dispite certain groups off ignoance and sheer dislike
dispite them for they actions to purposly detere my rights/"... nice words to live by.. yo, I ain't black but I'm still mad against racist shit.. so I do feel ya...

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Tjanmks to the ya'll that replaied I'll hit up your stuff the eturn the favor. The rest of ya'll holla and let me know what you think.

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^^ up some mo' lt me knwo wussup

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sweet drop yo....
the three steps just blew my mind man....keep writing

i thought this was nice. ya flow worked and ya vocab was aight but the topic handled very well. people say this topic is played but if people wanna start that shit then they better start givin us sum hip hop thats bein true to itself. likin it. anyway return the favour cuz check mine shinobi life aight peace