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04-03-03, 11:52 PM
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forgetting love
IP: 9D56 C4D3
little sumthin i been workin on....
It is the light scriptures dipicted in the tongue of reality The realization of truth hidden within the stars It is the breath of serenity The usage of dreaming yesterday Contradicted by today - reality You are gone It is the somber tears of remembrance Binding us together at night When we close our eyes The polar half of the bedspread Vacant with only brurry memories Haunting in the morning view You are gone It is the rigidity of newness The thought of starting over It is the silence after an awkward kiss A heart not yet sober - drunken bliss It is the tired promises of forever falling short I dying heart without a crutch lacking a lover's support it is the light scriptures dipicted in the tongue of reality The realization of destiny hidden in the stars It is the truth that turns false... I am forgetting love |
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04-04-03, 12:06 AM
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IP: 0A08 20B8
im feelin it nice work dawg
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04-04-03, 05:30 PM
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IP: 8B67 292D
it was ill ilmatiiiiiccc
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04-04-03, 06:16 PM
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Tampons are expensive
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IP: EF0A E7B2
nice work for ur first drop hurr....good vocabs..nice flow..i liked how the way u structured it...but u couldve end it differently..but yeh...keep onit
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> |
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