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my rhymes will hit you in every aspect of battling, my punches hit so hard u can hear the earth rattling//

who u think you are 50 cent?, ill put another dent in ya chest cuz u werent wearin ya bullet proof vest//

you think you got the sickest vendetta nigga check again, im the realest and illest opponent you've ever faced cuz ill pull off a win//

ya rhymes aint tight it just that ya pussy is, call me every night tryina get rhymes from the lyrical wiz//

you would have to write an 'essay' to beat 512, ill send you off in the 'brown' truck cuz i fucked up ya crew//

your rhymes couldnt take you to a higher level, cuz my rhymes will dacapitate you and sent to the devil//

couldnt land punches on fat joes fat ass, told the teacher i got killed by 512 and i need the restroom hall pass//

"i'll nick you wit a few shells" and u will walk wit a limp, cuz my nine will put anotha hole in ur body and you'll regret that you said you were a pimp//

i bet your crew does where pink jackets, it dont mean that you a pimp its just that yall a bunck of faggits//

you couldnt roll a philly blunt if you were a weed-man, its juat ya rhymes is wack and im tryin to do you a good deed-man//

dont take my rhymes for granted cuz you will regret it, you just a dumb ass school boy that doesnt even no 'how to' get a ciggarete lit//

dis kat will come back wit a wack-ass 512 diss, but the punches will miss cuz he spit wack-ness agianst my lyrical-fit-niss//

~no feeding off verse~


~out~

i c how u bit offa some of my previous battle erses but its coo though...i

my fault son...my internet is fucked so it keeps cuttn off...i will have to post up tomorrow at the latest...
im out

Vendetta be the masters of circuference
my thought cant behold body, mind control substance...

for the key to this shit, 512
Examin the imposter, group of A uh-life's...

my team be deep like a roster, you lobster
you break the edges of all the ?...

cut the tongues off all the snakes
just one hiss may cost ya, the price of ya life...

512 should always think twice, remember always think twice
because mistake may be comin away kid...

512, dont even bring that wack type of shit around me
you live get ya whole neck slapped off ya shoulders...

Quick fast, faster than the eye blink, so why think
you could live amongst the, livest mc's...

and Crew that I run with,
and collaborate my thoughts with...

to elevate to higher standard as I landed,
but never stranded as the Terrorist apprehended...

analog suspects on the set

Switch uP...

Yo I'm pullin wrestiln moves
my competition headlocked into submission...

while shots are lickin
pickin through crops of intuition...

yo my brain starts to change shorts are strange
names brought in vain, court physical force of unexplained...

For the battle of my life in the night light
this nigga grab a mic tight...
strike with a flash of dynamite, right...

So figure this, Vendetta get vigorous
a lyricist supremicist attackin the track like ? of villages...

Switch uP...
~Fatality...~

This is war on 512, a duel to the death...
You better make sure your swords sharp...
And you got a lyin' heart...
Cause, I strike for the throat...
And stab them with a deadly note...
That pierces the eardrums...
Those are the equally grym...
Now you're stunned...
Another victim of the Shogun...
A spinal chop to the cerebellum...
So, go ahead, try to run in advance...
Cause I stand firm on my warrior stance...
Ready to be-head you, dead you...
Rid your body of a soul, make it an empty vessel...
Because, your rhymes aint punctual...
My actual or factual, that's why I verbally attack you...

edited for bold...

UPPIN 4 VOTES

vendetta gotz my vote

tha otha nigga just extended his lines to much- i felt like ya was tellin me an off beat story for bed time

So, go ahead, try to run in advance...
Cause I stand firm on my warrior stance...

basically was tha battle, vendatta held his own and tha other nigga got a contract with sesme street bookz

1-0 me uppin^^ 4 mo votes

this battle wasnt that good as far as i see Vendetta got this easily 512 had really no punches no imagery

Ven had a good use of Syntax Nice punches
and everyone noes that punches win

vote-Ven

1 more for vendetta, even though it was freakin weird format, i dont know it was a pretty basic battle with no lines that stuck out like anything.

3-0 me uppin^^ can u also drop up poll votes at the top of the thread..they count...

uppin 4 votes..maker sure u poll vote iigth