10-15 lines no crew votes or biting recyclin you know drop first you got disscused time.

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This is Bribeone1's verse i copy and pasted it cause he posted in the wrong place

words i spit bound to infect like monkey spit in outbreak...
watch me hit and break every bone in youre skelotal workframe ..
and main thing youre brain schocked into compulsive mayday...
if it was youre time now its my day,,
.ok enough with that lets gett the matter at hand..
they say u want to be a man,be like a star,have a fan..
who would give a damn bout shakin youre hand..
let me break it to you man ,
,,or should i say fella,,fella good ol pal named MR .oka pela.
.i notice u idolize.yeah its nice,
but look closely do u see their eyes,
do u see the struggle do u see the drive.
does okapela have that drive,, to come out of this ring alive..
survive the onslaught of word thought .next time maybe,,
after u studied the lecture that bribe taught,lady,,,i
ts been years since ive written.but i chose u to be the first to feel the wrath of that im hittin....

Bribeone...

you claim you spit words that inflict
but to the people in the hood they don't mean shit
you supurbin bitch if ryhmin was basseball you couldn't hit my pitch im like rambo i got machine guns that shoot missles
don't mess wit me your only armed wit little hand pistols
if a couple of my bullets miss u plenty of em still hit u
i gaurente i'll crush any of them cats that hang wit u
my punchlines feel like bullets when they hit u
how you gona step to me on the mic
i'll eat you up like u was a mike n ike
this aint one of your video games
this is real cat your gambalin wit your life
it aint marrio ima squash you on the mic sorry yo
Damn just give me 49 seconds(the time it to mike tyson to ko the rhino)
im like mike tyso your like the rhino
i'll smack the color out of you and have you lookin like an albhino
ya'll look like michel jackson instead of kevin hale(white dude from celtics)changed your pigment to pale

okapela bitch

vote dogs

Bribeone1's got my vote, his shit waz more hardcore than tha others. if ockapela wouldve thrown one or two more tight punches he wouldve won, bribeone1 flow was alot betta though
tight battle on both parts though, props to both

bribeone has my vote
just had better verse structure and flow and also punches
wasn''t really feeling any of the punches though need to up on them

yo what happens to this shit if noone votes?

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MerK SquAd.

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bribeone got this. close battle but he just came harder. could you vote on m2 vs unfadeable? gracias