She passed by and left me speechless

The realization of her being mine among others made thoughts run wild and free within

Her hips swung while my jaw dangled freely with complete and sudden awe

She could walk the walk and talk the talk anytime of day

The flip of her hair to the licking of her lips had me

As her prescence was a once in a lifetime deal, she became my one and only black queen

Tell me, is this a dream or a reality?

For when my eyes reopened she was gone. Leaving not just me ...left alone in my own reality

Or was I dreaming?

She was gone and I could not see my lonliness which stood silent....silent right next to me

I became sprung

From the tip of her lips to the shake of her hips

The enternal remnance of 'love' disappeard from my thoughts......

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what do u guyz think..

i liked it. good structure

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Go ahead. Turn your back on me. Thats when I punch you in the back of your head. Faggot.

Fuck wit me once, shame on you. Fuck wit me twice, youre dead.

yo that was good shit....keep droppin shit like that man..... BIG UP'S YASELF