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Old 04-06-03, 04:01 PM   #1
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alright...this is a freestyle collabo from rapsearch...honestly I was a bit too lazy to type a new freestyle for my debut...so...here...

Intro

-Tha darkness falls, Watching death lurk in the shadows of hate/
we sit around, as if we're to decide our own fate/
watching known faces fall to the hands of eternal decay and rot/
We still try to outsmart nature, This is a battle being fought/


RELLIK

Clouds of calamity, replacing innocence with fear//
I watch in horror as if pain is a subject who's price is too dear//
reverie, lost in deep thought as if my day comes all too soon//
flooded in memories, I take flight on death's monsoon//
I lurk alone in the shadows, hiding and frightened of what lays ahead//
beheaded I lay, as if my cranium was filled with lead instead//
foreplay, a necessity, I let loose, setting truces at death's door//
venturing down to hell's gate, more than hate and fire at the earth's core//
dead bodies all around me, each marking man's responsibility to sin//
but shit is phased, and the rivers of truth are running thin//

Chorus

Finding peace within, We seek to win, and fail to lose/
Its not our choice on which tormented soul darkness will choose/
We use, we preach, we write of hate/
to whom darkness we conclude our fate/

RAW

We're Dark Within, Finding No Remorse In The Light Of Day/
We're Set To Pay, Each Driven Soul We Put on Lay-Away/
Described As The Last Desciples, We Struggle And Hassle For What's Emotionally Right/
Fighting Inside, We Weep At Night, Hustling To Find The Words Of Light/
Trapped In Eternal Darkness, Shit's Falling, Aint Even Enticing Anymore/
What More Do We Need, Great Minds Tucked Beneath The Floorboards/
We Are The Last Generation, Apocalypse Knocks At The Iron g
Gates And Beckons Our Company/
Misery Is Upon Us, We Hear Corpses Singing Wretched, And Cold Harmonies/
My Eyes, Bleed From What We Know, To Which Is Lost/
We Kill Living Souls, As If Their Bodies Were To Amount To Nothing At Cost/
It Eats Us Alive Inside, As We Strive To Hide The Fear Implied/
We Struggle To Stand Strong, As Death Comes Full Force Like High Tides/

chorus

Finding peace within, We seek to win, and fail to lose/
Its not our choice on which tormented soul darkness will choose/
We use, we preach, we write of hate/
to whom darkness we conclude our fate/

rellik

high tides, we constantly rock to death's motion//
we're too busy calming seas and parting darkened oceans//
we take heed to death, as to be a release from reality's harshness//
yet, we're the mules pulling hate on it's worm riddened harness//
feel the darkness, uprooting each and every living soul and beating heart//
it's too late, we've missed our chance for yet another restart//
So breathe in the turmoil filled air, as if shit was oxygen//
Great minds think alike, destroying their pads and pens//
dismantling body parts, they're hollow and lack structural form//
We watch in vivid imagery as the evil engulfs innocent hearts, forlorn//
we mourn fallen prophets, the darkness has fallen//
without names to identify, the dark lord is callin//
We're all in, this great race of humans are on the path for anialiation//
As we choose the color of our coffin, to secede would fall into violation//
As we wait impatiently for Death so line us on the wall//
or hopeless minds are broiled, we witness darkenss fall//

RAW

Hopeless, We Are, Without Proportions To Compare/
We're As Useless In This Race For Freedom, We Cease To Move At The Devil's Stare/
In Here, Are We Safe From Catastrophe's Yet To Take Place?/
Watch In Horror As Different Faces Of Every Race Fall To Death's Embrace/
Face It, Yet Another Civilization, Left To Ruins, Each Marked By Disdain/
We Follow Along The Red Lines Of All Those Victims Of Pain/
We Wear The Grin Of Evil, Are Smirks Belong To The Wretched Hands Of Death/
We Cease To Exist, At The Cold Wind Of Hell's Breathe/
Holding It, Subject To Cabinets Shared With Earth Worms And Dirt/
I've Fallen Yet Another Casualty To Where Darkness' Shadow Lurked...



I hope you all enjoyed this collab. It isn't the best of the crop, yet we hope to get some feedback...

out...RELLIK

and

*~^~*RAW*~^~*

(Incase you're wondering we're cousins and we're together right now, we decided to write this piece out of boredom, so it may be nothing special...)
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Old 04-06-03, 04:03 PM   #2
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and...here...another one from RS...to give you all a little taste...hehe..

Like reservoirs, Im saving energy to produce miraculous words on tha screen//
damagin spleens, i retract blood cells, recycle em, feed em to verb-hungry fiends//
serene as lyrical oceans seem, im burnin holes through coral reefs and shells//
dispeling yall minds of this plagued industry, it was good till ja rule shot it to hell//
im spelling out criminals, robbing the people of hope towards music that's good to the ears//
most fools are lyrically impaired, rendering rhymes that couldn't bring hannibal fear//
it's weird, what happened to tha persona of rap being heard through words that aren't infested with slug-feedin birds//
Great minds concurring, referring to tha lack of skill that music is engulfing, fuck, this shit's absurd//
Dispersing verses, of legends drivin aways in hearses, rehearsing obituaries that left people imbursed//
Reversing my lines so they could make decent rhymes, like time im inverting numbers, so their tha opposite of inverse//
Its a curse, tha way im jadin tha keyboard, leavin fingers to rest//
like asthmatic chests, i'm heaving these golden syllables, tha rap game i yet to conquest//
I.A.T.B..thats an acronym for I AM THA BEST, leaving fools to perish in the dust that i left//
im comin up quick, im still creepin for a comeback, like roaches, im infestin ya crib with my lines to invest//
So take heed to this need, ya need me, that's a fact, not an opinion//
dropping more ill lines than TRIGMATA and tha rest of tha MINIONS//
im on a roll, like dice, i land on 6, coincedentally thats tha number of KO'S i possess//
like Mike Tyson, im quick to bite off ya ears, to prevent biting, I rob ya clear of ya skill, like New Jersey auto theft//
but thats a wrap, im done chewing on y'all bubble gum artists, it dont even make sense no more//
like rotten floorboards, im leavin yall splintered and split, so next time i'm quick to spit a verse that'll leave ya cold in tha core!!!!!!


JUST A QUICKIE...NOTHING SPECIAL....A LIL FEEDBACK AND ALL IS STR8...

*VANISHES*
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Old 04-06-03, 05:11 PM   #3
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Kiss my ass.

Get the fuck off RB.

Take the rs shit outta your vocab if your gonna be here.
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