i cant sit still or get time to kill my urges that got me kneeling..
feel like the pain is growin each time my peeps keeps peeling..
Yeah some of us do dat crack cocaine dealing/..But dats how it is livin in this wonderland chillin/...Lay back in da lazyboy with a cold brew, nothin new cuz in da gutter its extreme like drinkin 5 mountain dews/... the wildside has its hoo rays and also has its boos/....No rodeo drive or surfboard's dudes/.....Just big smokin and a little bit of joking just to keep your goals hoping/...seeing my peeps sell corn, oranges and fake dvd's just to earn dat easy but plentyfull cheese/...there days go by, cool and rico suave sly/...Then three little pigs stopped by, checked around tryin to act as if they gonna buy/... They are here to put all sales of my peeps to da side/ ..das cold when u just tryin to survive and you got nothing else to live by/...These evil men did their carnage and left da people hangin dry with no money for da food supply/...These government relief funds aint giving enough money and help/..This fu's have our cards ready to get delt cuz everytime they manage to hit bellow the belt as we all scream "HELP"!./

sup man?
Yo man, I wasn't feeling this too much... I mean it's nothing too original, but it's real... so I respect that... I never think a verse a bout streets is wack unless it's just about guns and shit...
You're putting a point across here... I'm feeling that... you do have skill, but this verse could have been alot better... it had decent flow... it was bit on and off sometimes though... this was fairly short... but the point was taken, ya know...
a bit simple sometimes with the vocab and all... but not too simple... shit was straight man...

peace