aiight give er keep it under 30 lines pls

Aight here goes my first battle:

Caspah the friendly ghost, what a hoax
Go play with the boys in leave the rap 2 the adults
U can talk about keeping it gangsta, brag and boast
When u got a recurring role on Queer as Folk
I hope u don't think ya flows hot, I aint tryin 2 hear it
U the type of person 2 get banned for biting gay lyrics
Wherever I go I leave disease like SARS outta Chinatown
Lyrically battling me is like boxing with your guard down
...how u didn't c it coming but I still hit you where it hurts
and I left u crying after u got "slapped" like a baby at birth
I might b a rookie but I've been doin this for years
Ur freestyle lacks power like cars stuck in second gear
My verse versus yours, let the people decide who's weaker
personally,I think ur rhymes bad noise like a house party with a broken speaker
U might make this close, but i'ma still win the batle
My skills always ahead of you like a 4'o'clock shadow

hahaha

well at least it waddnt pre writtin, it was authentic spittin, too bad all ur spittin, had creativity missin,
listin carmon, i aint no friendly gost, i they type that flys through ur window at night and slits ur throat,
haha u bring up queer as folk, but i think ur the actor,
ima make a porno with ur mom and be sure to name it after er,
who wants to see a porn with ur mom tho, she needs to put some fat on her tits, she could borrow it from her bum tho,
that fat bitch had u right b4 christmas,
to bad ur sorry ass wasnt on mom and dads wish list,
u know u were a fuckin mistake,
what happend? did the condom break?
didnt that penny whore know better then that for fucks sake?
she wasnt on the pill, she was too poor, 30 cents a day for 40 fucks or more,
maybe u should try another game, cuz if u keepin on rappin ull kill ur self from shame

uppin 4 votes

come on someone vote for this battle

anyone?