8 lines/bars
u spit 1st
3 KO
5 win
ya know the shit...
*withn erasonable time

ILLWRITTEN? HOW YOU GONNA START FROM A FALSE PRETENSE?//
I'LL PICK YOU APART LIKE A WEAKNESS IN MY OPPONENT'S DEFENSE//
HOW YOU GONNA WIN WHEN YOU GOT NO BACK LIKE WEAK FACTIONS//
YOUR MOM EVEN TRIED HOLDING IN WHEN SHE FELT THOSE CONTRACTIONS//
DAMN DOG, SHE WANTED TO ABORT YOUR FETUS//
SO FOR YOU IT'S A GOOD THINK YOUR GRANDMA WAS SO CLOSE TO JESUS//
AND WOULDN'T LET HER GO THROUGH WITH THE SURGERY//
YOU STARTED DEAD FROM BIRTH SO HOW YOU GONNA MURDA' ME?//

8 LINES . . . SPIT IT

MY BAD, 6TH LINE SHOULD SAY "GOOD THING" NOT "GOOD THINK"

yo im da illicit explicit sedistic efficient cynical delinquent//
and this is my elicit deliverance of nonficticious shit which depicts//
metaphysical's typical digital emission of predicted prewritten simplistic linguistic resistence//
to my specific instinctive unlimited intricate//
description (thats so enrichin' they call it a religion)//
which hits yu in the head as if it was physical //
but its just my mythical liguistic unrealistic tricks that insist on ur extinction//
the tricks that distinguish the rest from illwritten, bitch//

this verse lacks hard punches but wtf.......

illwritten, ya couldve made them wordz into a song and it still wouldve been just a filler. Ya had me lost-rhymin every fuckin word at tha beginin-itz kinda like saying ya a gay faggot, dont make no sence-maybe ya should battle longer shit

YOUR MOM EVEN TRIED HOLDING IN WHEN SHE FELT THOSE CONTRACTIONS//
^^hot
liked how ya made tha whole thing related, flowed smooth

VOTE=metaphysical one

nice battle by both just to much shit in tha one

no hate

1-0 . . . c'mon people, VOTE!!!!!

decide this shit already

metaphysical one ya got my vote boy

thanks, geeshwa . . . that's 2-0 . . .

let's get some more votes

vote meta..
other kat only had vocab, no punches

return the favor.. vote on my battle vs conspiracy