aiyyo who can hold this wrath ofmine like Magowabi/
ancient Babylonian, surrounded by rotten bodies/
plots known for leaders on podiums/
interfering you from hearing truth to control the petroleum/
its all in they pockets/
profits the marked since the loss of your optics/
the course of my clock ticks/
for remorse of prophets of Marxists dot communist/
to be democratic/
this character would be found in section 8 of my demographic description/
deception and hate that led to the puppets of weapons/
the puff of my breath went...lyrically soul's lost in your hands like angery shoe polishers/
to be forced to spew consciousness/
destined to you, if you believe i'm lesser tha you/
then brother i hope Allah blesses you, with better messaged youth/
cuz this aint Christopher Columbus/
this is Brithis American socumpherence, whos a terrorist/
based on enslavement and suicides, so carry this/
you brave men? please land of the fee home of the slave/
i'm standing beneath all that i say, lost in a gaze/
all iever cared for was family and Allah metaphoric the names/
you gave us Saddam towards a pile of corpses and plagues/
calm in the race to torch us in flames/
you run with Mason son's that have to win/
aiming the claim and placing a gun to your head and laughin within/
last but not least...your cash just got reached/
to half Iraqs streets, where soldiers were scolded, and molded with ashes/
theres no satisfaction vented in here/
the air is conditioned, entering my lungs and mind, pumped in my system/
like hyperventalating perscriptions/
i stare into your eyes, caring to despite my apparent demise/
tearing this life a divided crime, swear to appear to you twice/
if this life is a margin, textualized and written, boarded in a prison/
i'd step into my survival thriving from the start till the endin...

Samahullah, Samahullah

lmao.
dope.
dif than
most of
your usual
shit. but
very dope.
you have
very nice
skills keep
dropping
like this one
right here.
nice job.

8-10

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thanks dunny...i try to change my style every now and again namsayin...look out for my new shit...good looking out...wahid

shit was hot, good vocab and ideas in there and good flow
thatd be a real nice piece to hear ya namean, its not just god text but its got a nice flow and style itd sound good

take a peep at my drop man

thanks dunny...and yes i do have that in audio but the verse is some much longer...the whole track is 5 minutes long...good looking out...wahid

"the air is conditioned, entering my lungs and mind, pumped in my system/
like hyperventalating perscriptions
plots known for leaders on podiums/
interfering you from hearing truth to control the petroleum/
its all in they pockets/
profits the marked since the loss of your optics/
the course of my clock ticks/"

the vocab n word play in those lines were awsome, that was some madd shit, i like the way u put yo shit together,
i gotta ask ya like where do u get ur inspiration to write pieces like this from, i mean i felt sum a this shit's anger towards whats happenin in Iraq u gotta tell us

Ill , Ill , Ill ,Ill piece

thank you...yo Trill i am Iraqi dunny thats where i get my inspiration from namsayin...i got another verse for that rhyme and its dedicated to the Iraqi children....i even got an audio fo rthat rhyme as well...anyways good looking out...wahid

Damn kid, that shit was hot as hell... you ain't get back to my nigga Blunt_MC on you joinin' our click. What's up? You interested? Your wordplay was on point, and the way it flowed was vicious. Uppin' this joint.

This was nice dunz, feelin the style change..

hit me up for a collabo..

spread the deen brother...

peace
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yo narc.. another tight spit.. topic varied through the piece, all political script tho.. I was feelin' this bar:
"cuz this aint Christopher Columbus/
this is Brithis American socumpherence, whos a terrorist/
based on enslavement and suicides, so carry this/"

^ it made me think, and when I did it became clear... The flow as a whole worked pretty well, and yeah I agree with Sand, it is a dif. style from your usual but that means you diversify yourself.. that's talent, half the peeps on this site have the same style, topic, and vocab in all they pieces.. That pisses me off, 'cause I get mad sick of readin' it.. ne-way, stay up brethrin'.. 1

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Shurkran (thank you in arabic)....masn imma post the first part of that flow namsayin...its long but if you read it thru it makes sense namsayin...good looking out...and Enigmatic pm me dawg...wahid

very good drop

vocan and structure and flow were ya strong points in this one to me ober all good ish


yo hit a rply in this one http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43961

thanks dunny
good looking out
wahid