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hes coming first here, hold-on, that’s his knew wrecord 0-1/
me and his man a tag team, cept my punches aint for his colon/
thinkin he-hot, only advance through de-fault, like lava/
im in the cut, ur rhymes in vein, like nameless martyrs/
his cru fake? shit….... there named after LIeing/
this cat get robbed for drugs, and arrested for supplying/
couldn’t make a round in a gun barel fac-to-ry/
he got no class, he aint got the right faculties/ (school)
ur lines couldn’t give shots, if u wrote them in bars/
drive by’d be easy, hoes approach slow moving cars/
in a spiked food fight u couldn’t win with E’s/
rtickulate, ur never ever dry - in ur dreams/
ur personals as accurate as ur spelling of victim/
no matter what u write u still get a bad name, like dickens/
rtikulates plans just been foiled, like leftover steak/
cant rap, go bac to ur dayjob, what? ur customers gone straight...

there i had to post early cos im busy, match the 16, guluck
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i know you dont expect to win with that??

Let me Key something..

does my land say Atlantis? since u've always doubted my iLLness' main existence//
when u know very well that I am ahead of you in a vast mile of a distance//
I am tha god of complexity while ur being examined as tha continous lyrical calamity//
claiming ur iLL when ur elevation is lackin capacity its no motherfuckin fallicy//
and now u got tha audacity to talk trash when ur tha only one who spits garbage//
u can play soccer wit information banks and u still wouldnt kick knowledge//
Since tha only time u gonna flow wit heat is if u clipped a curling iron on ya penis//
this pathetic knocked-out could pose as Albert Einstein and he still wouldnt b considered a genius...//

SWITCH

The sonic reverberation I spit in your eardrum shatters your nerves leaving this bitch deaf to my Taste/1
Sweat from ya forehead weeps cause you cannot hear only sound,vision.see da anger in my pissed off face/2
Smiles and laughter from all who witness~ your~ demise starts to trigger tears of sorrow and torment/ 3
Fatman heart flutters & valves rupture~spewing blood like lava from a volcano that was centennials dormant/4
As he grasps his chest, he gasps for oxygen are futile cause his entire rhyme he pre-composed w/ hype/ 5
Was full of stuttering and uttering from his lungs overloaded with cum gone down fatmanwindpipe/6
As his heart beat trickles away to a dead muscle with almost no tussle his ghastly whispers with a frown… /7
Honestly God, why didn’t you tell me not to hustle & just deny My’s challeng by just backing down

My Vote Rtickulate

Very7 Few Punches By Both
But.....
Rtikulate Came Alot Harder than Fatman

Retunr The Favor
Vote on My Battle Against .Sand.

Peace

what? didnt that verse have a punch in?

anyways uppin for votes

heres the votes i did:
lyricalu-dirtyboy
killa kobra-consipircy

ill vote on somemrore later

Vote: Fatman... he just had an overall better verse... and it seemed that Rtik was concerned with volcab... no punches

^

my vote goes to fatman he had a better verse with more n better punches n better flow rtik's shit was gud but fatman jus edged it

ok battle...

punchez- fatman
personalz- fatman
flow- fatman
wordplay- fatman
vocab- rtikulate
complexity- rtikulate

fatman had tha overall better verse. i wuz feelin hiz punchez more

^that wuz tha best line from fatman. had me laughin for a minute.

tha first part of rtikulate'z verse wuz good. he fell off with tha second part.


^only good line i can find

vote- fatman

I'm givin' my vote to Rtikulate ... I was just feelin' his verse more ...

and now u got tha audacity to talk trash when ur tha only one who spits garbage//
u can play soccer wit information banks and u still wouldnt kick knowledge//

Fatman's sit I liked
rtikulates plans just been foiled, like leftover steak/
cant rap, go bac to ur dayjob, what? ur customers gone straight...

Pz