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04-07-03, 06:48 PM | #1 | ||||||
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life changes in a second (plz comment on freestyle)
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itz funny how a nigga can be bangin' tha club all nite wit tha mic/
and go to changin' diapers, and silencin' crys in tha middle of tha nite/ go from jumpin' from venues in tha city wit bitches who pretty/ to holdin his baby boy, til' he go to sleep, man that shits gritty/ or even fuck your girl crazy, you know she likes it that way/ and just cuz u make paper, she calls it rape, and you in court tha next day/ or even smoke that chronic, or get that shit sold/ and your friends frame you then blame you , man that shit's cold/ cuz niggas i speak of tha future, like tha book of Revalations/ but all of a sudden i'm tha topic in everyones conversation/ tha man that had everything, now doesn't even have a girl/ i get pushed against tha wall, its me against tha world/ niggas couldn't take me, so they wanted me out in a rush/ all ma dreams of cream, man that shits crushed/ success has left me, like all tha life at a club shootin' scene/ can't even turn on tha t.v without ma name on tha screen/ i wish i never signed that record deal, that wish i be beggin/ take it in writing underground emcees, yo' life can change in a second/ Last edited by grimey won : 04-07-03 at 07:54 PM. |
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04-07-03, 06:51 PM | #2 | ||||||
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i am really feelin that- nice rap and style. deep stuff.
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04-07-03, 06:52 PM | #3 | ||||||
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Short, but I was liking one certain part especially.
"tha man that had everything, now doesn't even have a girl/ i get pushed against tha wall, its me against tha world/" Feeling the message in this piece, the whole "everything changes instantly." I mean, it's kind of played, but you still did this piece pretty well wih that topic. You should've made it loner, that's my only complaint. Re-pay: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=37749 that's wrd. |
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04-07-03, 07:40 PM | #4 | ||||||
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more gangsta shit.....zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, nothing original or hard hitting about this verse, although the rape lines were pretty deep and imagic. originality is pirceless
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04-07-03, 09:23 PM | #5 | ||||||
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jonny 6-feet i think u need 2 put ur raps were ur mouth is, cause i heard u rap, and it wasnt anythin special, stop talkin shit bitch and fuckin flow, anyways, grimly i was feelin the shit, i could picture that bein an audio, think bout it, i thought it was good
soilder22 PS check out my new post "a soilders nightmare" Last edited by InFiNiTe_22 : 04-07-03 at 09:26 PM. |
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04-07-03, 09:35 PM | #6 | |||||||
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word, that was some deep shit
just donno if it was fo real ya know, i donno u maybe that is u and ur life and if so then it was deffinalty dope if not dogg it was still good rap just not u either way i felt it |
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04-08-03, 11:29 AM | #7 | ||||||
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that piece was real, you can feel the regret and pain throughout the verse... nice drop... keep droppin'
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