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04-08-03, 07:14 PM | #1 | ||||||
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More raps, tell me how i'm doin
IP: C779 902B
yo yo yo...damn this kid is so whack
certainly he deserves a smack cuz hes lackin and smackin he sucks so bad he cant even start mackin...(ouch) yo watch out now ima bout to flip out and then..POW as amatter of fact ima gonna do it now i dont even wanna hear what u ahve to say.. u a lil QT, are you gay? when i hear ur rhymes it makes me sick sounds so bad u sound like backstreet boy nick... hey maybe if u good u can kick it in da hood but not wit me noooo u cant mess wit me can u see? ima gonna be a winner, let alone a MC... walkin round wit those baggy clothes tryin to attract those god damn hoes... yeah right u need to be tight... ahh u so bad u sound like lil bow wow on "Like mike" I'm tryin to work on my audio ones, if anyone would like to help me out then please email me at sportzplaya3001@hotmail.com i'm tryin to write songs those of you wit record deals..let me know how they are... |
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04-08-03, 07:54 PM | #2 | |||||||
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I don't know what was the deal callin' me out on my own thread in the Members Pic section but...ummm... check your pm.
Ohh yhea your little rhyme up there^^^^, that bullshit was wack. |
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04-08-03, 07:57 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C779 902B
sorryman, just lookin for some help...if u wanna help me out, let me know, we could be tight yo
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04-08-03, 08:55 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: 736D B1B5
I see potential in you. Now, if you keep writing shit like that above, then you will never reach it. Not that I am one to critcise, because I'm not a great MC myself. Heres my idea for you: write about something, rather than spouting drivel about nothing. It can be something violent if you wanna battle rap, or something meaningful that you wanna talk about. Just something, for the love of god man.
Peace
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