why is the same bein who developed me, is tryin to indanger my life//
why is she so bent on makin my life struggle instead of somethin nice//
why must she make each day a tormented day of pain instead of paradise//
why does she claim where family when she treats me like im a differnt life form//
why does she call me son when she knows not who i was outward torn//
her words that she thinks helps me survive trutly are words of scorn//
i hate her yet love her while the time apart i dont mourn//
if only she knew she killed me the night she failed//
if only she knew i wished me death had only yet prevailed//
if only she knew i had nothin more to hold on then her soul vail//
she would have known her oldest child had yet to have grown a man//
she treats me like im a beast instead of the one did once come from her whomb//
i wish i would have visited my casket atleast i found love in my tomb//
my life shouldnt have started on oct. 27th instead yet began its own death//
which each thought that enters another chance at my finally breath//
if only the easy route i take my own life but what about my real family left//
my baby and her baby waitin for my livin soul that would be tru theft//
i made a life and to leave it like my mother would only be tru pain//
the turth is i got nothin to lose except my soul,hers and my babys to gain//
yet why would i wish such a nasty death upon my mother hands//
her words so movin as such a stars last remain fans//
why did she kill me yesterday with such unlovin hands//


only those who kno me will understand this poem it wasnt a well thought poem just a ease my mind one so please keep the hate to a min. thanx

no hatred my fellow poet/
truth from the heart/
full of pure emotion/
never stop expressing true emotions/
BE PEACEFUL

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aw baby i kno where u was comin from for i was their that un grateful night. I love u boo
~jessica~21 and ofcource lil justin jr

damm just...i was feelin this man..yeah u told me bout this soooo i kno whatchu mean...nice piece tho..straight from the heart...keeponit

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thanx for the luv

i was feelin in the pain in ya writing,good post, keep on wit it

BIG UPS TO YA....like everybody else said that was straight from tha heart and i like shit like that so keep droppin dawg...

thanx for the luv shown

hey tru liez you know i mostly hate on you all the time but on a respectable level, but this time i feel your same pain and i do know where you are coming from because my mom is the same way. that was deep keep flowing

thanx glad that u and me robbie have came to a understandin

Well this actually remind's me a shit load of what I posted called a mother daughter fight.... yea... its in open mic or here.. i believe I posted it about two three weeks ago.. there for I would prefer not to comment on this one... there too much alike. OoNnEe