aiyyo..
we used to be royal/
loyal..till my kin binged on sin and oil/
beneath the soil, pressure and turmoil/
starvation, aggression and slaughtered nations/
behind bars like back ups if we act up, and speak hard Narcicyst of the marshes/
swarmed by self...Jihad himself/
shattered health, bad habits and batted for wealth/
a slave to my own change and jewelry, trapped in Iraq and other Arabs were held/
so prove to me, that opportunities are for unity/
and truely you through eluding me/
assume its me in your position soon to be foolishly/
labeling compostions, oppositions to all your bombs and missions/
abolished ties....staring down the eyes of a colonizer/
picture perfect painter, quote me you aint shit like artificial fertilizer/
spread apart my rituals, by police individuals/
land ownership, and decreasing the missles/
at the hands of the weak officials/
no initial plans to defend my land, burned and turned into Middle Eastern vigils/
see wenches like you...my island scheme, i stay a silent beam/
no talking while you walk over me, hawking me with your violent means/
all the dreams of a bias/
starking whips and streams of tyrant pirates/
scenes of bloodshed, why my pen runs red/
i believe in a higher source of justice, encompassed energy, the trusted highness/
while you seek supremecy over man, trying to blind the mind and iris...

my mental weaves metaphors to motivate religious wars...

uppin

still uppin

i like it, good topic, i felt it flowed preety decent

why people sleepin on this this is tight. ya topic is handled well and ya multies and rhyme scheme are heavy. it flowed pretty much perfectly thru out too. 9/10 for this piece

ANYWAY CUZ RETURN THE FAVOUR CHECK MINE AND JONNY 6 FEETS NEW COLLAB IF I RULED THE WORLD

^^thanks for the reply dunny...no doubt i will return the favor and shit...good looking out...one

definetley feelign this peice narc,seeing how i used to live in the middle east myself,riyahd aint a pretty place in the slums wher ei was,the same types of thoughts filled the air and created alot of hatred between people...that dictaor fool embodied that hate and attacked his own people with it,would be a scary place,was while iwas there for the week i spent...
my metaphors motivate religous wars...excellent line forsure....
hit me up

thanks dunny...these kats are gonna be shocked when The 9th Majesty comes thru namsayin...good looking out...one

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9th majesty gonna be crushing ingdoms no doubt,chekc your pm

I try to post on everyon'es post to make sure i get more replies on my post .... so here we go I'ma break down your flow and tell you about it lol
I dont believe the words held and wealth really go together..
I like you ending bar... it was nice...
you used good vocab
overall it was a good piece... OoNnEe

good shyt narc....anotha nice piece the way i c it...was feelin all of it..and held n wealth wasnt meant to go together..maybe u read the lines wrong lol.....ne wayz..nice drop...i replied to ya pm..get bacc at me...