Frozen UNWINDS WOUND CLIQUES~ HEAT UNBINDS BOUND SCRIPTS~ so HE’S DEFINED NOW WITH~ THESE REFINED SOUND SPITS~ Triple ya Laughs when “3 BLIND CLOWNS TRIPPED”~ “Shrunk” competition when HEAT SIZED DOWNED THIS~ “Oil Cooked Bodies” so DEEP FRIED SOUNDS SICK~
gotta be heard so I REPLIED LOUD, QUICK~ “Superstar jerseys” like HEAT SIGNED OUTFITS~ Then got 1 million cash for the “HOTTEST FROZEN” JERSEY~ got ya all scared so ya “SHOPS IS CLOSIN EARLY”~ Ya want “Lisa” while ya “POPS IS HOPIN SHIRLY”~ Disagreeing that all my DROPS IS GOLDEN SURELY~ just check the “FORUM” I POST IN~ deliver all the time so Heat they CALL UM DA “POST MAN”~ No matta what “Hail, RAIN, SLEET OR SNOW”~ you not winnin how could a No NAME BEAT A PRO?~ physically scar ya until the PAIN’S “DEEP” AS “THROAT”~ and catchin me. How? when this “LAME’S FEET IS BROKE”~ from “broke bones and burns” cuz this FLAMED HEAT IS STOKED~ and hip hop’s downfall BLAME ME? GET CHOKED!~ all of the TRAINEES IS HOPE~ that one day the SUBJECT WILL CHANGE~ from bein gangsta, BUDGET, KILL, RANGE~, PIMPS, HOS AND DRUGS~ to somethin other then LIMP FLOWS FROM THUGS~ Ask ya self. “Do I really believe being a NYMPHO IS LOVE?”~ “Do I really care bout other peeps INDO AND BUZZ”~ “Do I really care about ya PINTO AND LUGZ?”~ “Do I really care if ya WINDOW IS SHUT?”~ cuz of all the time ya spent gettin “INTO THE GUNS”~ always “Fightin” sayin I could “WIN THOSE WITH SLUGS”~ Even though when the END GOES IT’S LOVE”~ So try somethin DIFFERENT FOR ONCE~ “Swallowed hot snot” so I can “SPIT FLEM” FOR LUNCH~ My “Laxative” mouth “GIVE THEM THE RUNS”~ I mean gangsta,s askin me ISN’T IT DONE~ “Shredding Heat” but unlike you I’m not “GRIPPIN A GUN”~ I’m “Shredding Heat” cuz I’m “RIPPIN THE SUN”~ To pieces, now I’m “SHIFTIN A CHUNK”~ to another spot to be “LIFTIN THE SUM”~ of the “Hottest” and “WICKEDEST” TONGUE~ “You” beatin “God”, never like “NECKS KISSIN A TONGUE”~ Battle me “Right”, I’ll Rip out ya esophagus, and ya “LEFT” MISSIN A LUNG~ now ya “Destined to Hell” like “Someone who Didn’t CONFESS TRIPPIN A NUN”~ I'm “Right” when sayin battlin me Is just “Wrong” like DISSIN ON “PUN”~ <<--(R.I.P.)

UPPN

YO YOU RIPPED THAT SON I LIKED IT YOU CAN CATCH THE BEAT SO EASY I M FEELING THAT KEEP IT COMEN

definitly a hot peice....easy flow an good word play 8/10

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

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Really had no topic to it...alot of rhymes together, I'm sorry I'm not hating but I really wasn't feeling it..Made no sense at all...you had good rhymes but like i said..not very organized..

Three blind clowns trip???...that line killed it

no concept in this... but fuck it... the wordplay and flow was crazy... I was feeling it... I can't really say much else... I haven't writen in long time, so I can't really give advise... lol...
Peace