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Collaboration: Shadow God and Cameo - Battle Wreckaz
IP: D160 7C6D
-Shadow…
-Move quick with spits that invisibly split ya lip…Cause ya brain to unclip memories down ya spinal tip. -And my name is?, You wouldn’t have a chance to take it in…Give ya a repercussion, Leavin ya laid out with other dead men. -I speech to all you fake emcees who claim to wreck kats…I spit bullets that clap ya skull cap, I always stay strapped. -I’m a stop boastin and let Cameo take over tha toastin…Math Pro Killahs that tie kats and blaze em for roastin. -Cameo its like the respect, that if i wanted to, i'd buy weed with a cheque i can put the rich into debt and rename them as a redneck when u done battle me your such a reck, cuz i took out your vocal coords and it feel like your head split from your neck now the god of the shadow meet up with me cameo and together our flow glows whiter than snow our rhymes speak a thousand words like that of a photo were still underground cause were betta than pro hes the arrow and im the bow we unite to shoot into your heart and grow this aint even nothin...conisder this a friendly memo -Shadow -Shadow God and Cameo, There's not even a thought that we can be touched...Spit so much, People often think we're both blunted up. -Receive andrenaline bursts, My prayers in church have been answered...That's why I'm lord over dead souls, Banned from Earth from givin out devil banners. -Too raw to compete with, Each punchline you'll get beat with...Teeth broken along with ya jaw, Have you droolin red spit. -I'll never go down cause Cameo watchin my back...Tha rest of tha crew in tha cut, Ready to put slugs in ya cap. -Rhyme like Evil Kineval cause I perform dangerous acts...Take you back to tha old days and tortue ya with an iron axe. -Spit out of control, A loose cannon who can always get bold...You buck, Be assured you will get murked and that's how tha story was told. |
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IP: 9B26 8E3E
nice collab, straightforward punches and hard lines. good sense of collaberation and flow here.
good work, some nice imagery with that iron axe line as well. keep on posting. |
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IP: 7C3D F3BB
yer i likes the axe line too,nice punchlines yall,nice work with this,straightforward blows all round...niceness...peep my peice
bismillah Last edited by Atetrack define' : 04-07-03 at 01:04 PM. |
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IP: 072B 152E
as they said this was nice. though i think shadows verses were slightly bettwe just cos they seemed to flow more, i liked ya rhyme schemes they were both tight. vocab was nice and well ya punches standard. like jonny said ya work well together.
ANYWAY CUZ RETURN THE FAVOR AND CHECK MINE BANGKOK BUSINESS AIGHT PEACE |
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IP: 2811 B7BF
hes the arrow and im the bow
we unite to shoot into your heart and grow I like the symbloism in that line and of course the popular arrow line both ya verses were good I lost the flow a couple of times, but that happens pretty easily in text cuz u cant hear it overall a very decent collab |
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IP: D160 7C6D
Good lookin out..
Uppin for more. One Hundred.. |
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IP: 1769 3B0F
hot peace no doubt
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IP: D160 7C6D
Thanks for replies.
Uppin.. One Hundred.. |
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IP: 399E F0FD
Uppin this post up.
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