gotta take credit for all the advice I recieve/
It has him that said and done it - not me/
while you was discussing peace treaty tactic's/
I was dropping bombs on tel-aviv/
Cos i'm as smart as plato and Socrates/
Lyrical supremist like the incrediable B.I.G/
Bush is now desisive of what to do with al Queda/
There not coming, there already here - exposing our fear/
while were all waiting on the king of rap to reappear (pac)/
I'm persueding satan to fuck the calender year (fuck that)/
and bring armageddon forward - bring this pit downward/
surly we cannot accept these unfair commandments/
so we can join saddam and get commended to fight/
fight off the allied invaders - they ain't crusaders/
pretty soon they gonna pay us - for all the pain they caused/
so they better get outta sight - my collition won't pause/
till they feel the might of Osama - it ain't a federal crime/
that i gotta pick controverisal subject in order to rythme/
Maybe i'm more than the sign of the devil/
One day i'll have my 15 minutes to shine - wait till the time/
and when that monmentuous day in your like comes/
You'll shrivel up worse than a 5 year old prune/
listen up ya'll - that day is coming SOON!

u had a nice topic but i just wasn't feelin ya still. ya rhymes were off in alot of spots. maybe this would've been better in audio. work on ya vocab and rhymescheme. keep spittin and elevatin. 1

o.k..thanx...

I'm finding myself writin stuff like everyday now, so i should hopefully be elevatin' soon