aiight i never even realised i was supposed to battle this guy i know i never said i would but whatever i found this earlier so ima respond now

his verse was:LOOK ITS 14 LINES..NO MORE..NO LESS..NO DICK RYDIN VOTES..NO CREW VOTES...MAKE IT YA BEST....I'LL GO 1ST....

LETS SEE U TRY 2 TALK TOUGH WEN I WAVE THE NINE/1
DA ONLY THING YOU WAVE IS YA HANDS JUST TO SAVE TIME/2
BUT WHEN DA 9 GIVE YOU A WAVE THEN YOU CHANGE YA MIND/3
YOU BETTER MAKE UP YA MIND BEFORE I PUSH YA BRAINS IN TIME/4
THEN GET DA GAUGE TO COME BACK LIKE MAMMA JOKES/5
WEN U "RAP" ITS LIKE "BABIES" WIT "OLDER FOLKS"/6
U NOT ON MY LEVEL, IM IN A PAGE WIT SPAWN/7
U THINK TRYIN TO GET TO MY "LEVEL" IS TRYNA BE BATMAND "BEYOND"/8
GO PLAY WIT YA SISTER CUS U LIKE TEA PARTIES/9
AND I'LL "TOSS" YOU OFF THA "BOARD" LIKE DA "BOSTON TEA PARY"/10<THREW TEA OFF SHIPS WHYLE ON BOARD
IF U FLOSSIN YA JEWELRY DEN IM TAKIN YA CASH/11
U GONNA GET "STRIPPED" LIKE WITE KIDS AFTER "TAKIN A BATH"/12
DA BOARD IS LIKE "FOOD" CUS MY NAME "RING BELLS"/13<I'M SERVIN EMCEES TOO MUCH
I FEED U MORE "SPAM & COOKIES" THAN "AOL"/ 14

heres mine

Ima hit your verse with my lyrical assult,
take ur breath away like a bank robber locked in the vault,
the cop yelled "freeze" and shot ya with "novocain",
thats why ur verse got no "feelin" like uv never known-no-pain,
ur vocab was on heard of, u got the "book" skills of a "worm",
and just like an "old dog" theres no way ull ever "learn",
for some1 who likes "comic" books your really not "funny",
you had "diarreah" of the mouth, cuz all ur sentences were "runny",
your "uncommenly" "sencless" and "extraordinaly" "bland",
your run over like the corner store that couldnt meet demand,
u like a girl commin off the pill ur "spottin" tha best,
like the ADD kid in school, couldny concentrate on my test,
while you act "cool as ice" your startin to slip,
like the junky on the ledge, you had a "bad trip". (acid trip)

aiight lets see the votes

i guess his whole name is QB sniper but whateever

uppin for some votes

wait, which one is which?

wheres the other boys rap?

oh ok the first one in Caps is his verse and the next one is mine, as in second=Caspah 1st=QB sniper

VOTE!!!!

caspah, u had some good hits u got bigeazy vote dawg!!!

Uppin for votes
u vote more my battles ill vote for urs

caspuh u got this dog

hey scortch can u vote in the polls please

still uppin for votes

the cop yelled "freeze" and shot ya with "novocain",
thats why ur verse got no "feelin" like uv never known-no-pain
This was a nice one, caspah, a pretty hard punch
I'd have 2 give this one to you also, just make sure u spell all the words properly (or close 2 their real spelling) so u don';t confuse n e 1

thanx for the votes
gimmi one more for th ko please

and about tha spellin, is there anyway to spell check on here or do i have to copy and paste it in like word perfect to do that??
cuz i reeeeally cant spell lol

Vote=caspah