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04-11-03, 06:57 PM
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Speakin tha truth
IP: 618E 78B0
Wuttup world,dug this out my notebook..lemme kno wutchu think
Its AMAZIN...how tha killaz remain anonymous/ Murdaz is like hoes-f*ckin wit evry1 but iz nethang but monogamous/ Tha government aint keepin its promises/ Seein situations filled wit hostages/ Still see mah folks caught in political bondages/ Still see heads eatin str8 outta tha garbages/ Now these mofo's came up with tha crime shevels/ To dig up sum dirt on dis rhymin rebel/ Dis world's filled with demonic forces and grimey devils/ Would I be a MC if I rocked diamond bezels?/ Its kinda incredible how ppl's mind levels/ Can drop from 10 to 0 jus by me standin behind dis barrel/ I aint hea for tha cash or entertainment/ Im hea tryna make bout 20 statements/ Like why Arabs r considered uncivilzed cuz they strap xplosive packages to they girls/ We kill our own ppl,shoot up schools could WE be tha tru savages of the world?/ Life cherish it..Death beware of it/ Cuz u can waste a whole life and besides dyin,thas tha scariest* lemme kno..Stay ^ -Avi |
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04-12-03, 01:13 PM
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
PHAT MAN!
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04-12-03, 01:33 PM
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IP: 7B1B B8FB
yeah it was str8
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04-12-03, 01:36 PM
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IP: 7B1B B8FB
uppin
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04-12-03, 03:39 PM
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IP: 27EA 5505
hot shit...as always you came thru namsayin...i had to read it twice i liked it that much...one
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04-12-03, 03:52 PM
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IP: 618E 78B0
thanx for tha feedback.thanx rekluse for uppin,haha.Stay ^
-Avi |
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04-12-03, 03:53 PM
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IP: A852 87B1
good rhyme...but still it is kinda fucked up when people put bombs on women if thats not savage then i don wanna meet u in a dark alley haha. im jus playin, that shit was good
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04-13-03, 05:27 PM
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IP: 618E 78B0
^^uppin
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04-13-03, 07:12 PM
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-Warrior-
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IP: 0A9E 395A
preety ill duke
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04-13-03, 08:26 PM
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
Like why Arabs r considered uncivilzed cuz they strap xplosive packages to they girls/
We kill our own ppl,shoot up schools could WE be tha tru savages of the world?/ Life cherish it..Death beware of it/ Cuz u can waste a whole life and besides dyin,thas tha scariest* tightest lines in the whole piece really tells it like it is. though i gotta admit suicide bombers are fucked up. anyway tight little verse ya vocab was tight but the rhyme scheme got on my nerves a bit but still complex and deep shit. anyway RETURN THE FAVOUR CUZ and check mine and Jonny 6 feets collab aight peace bro |
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