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.Harmony.
IP: A6F7 168B
Got niggas mad at me, but gravity...//
Ain't strong enough to hold me down// Mad cause he's not dethroned, but crowned// My goals are proud and my robe is brown// I rose through a method known as flow// Been through horror thats not known to Poe// A poem I wrote has never posed as a gloat// But braggin' has to happen when I'm rappin// Your skills are slackin' mine are happenin'// Due to the skull where my mind is trapped in// My rhymes attacking your minor passion// Of trying to outshine without shine// You have none, so how can you have more than I// I'm immortalized as a millenial Mordecai// With every war of rhymes, I'm more despised// My birth on earth was the Lord's suprise// To mankind a blessin' with every damn rhyme// Oral eyes, I spit pictures that prophesize// Through the author's eyes, then are authorized// Organized, handed to choirs, then harmonized// It's impossible to absorb my rhymes in normal time// Different type flow for all y'all cats... what ya think?! |
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IP: 618E 78B0
nice spit homie.U jus lettin ppl kno wut u about,thas coo.STay ^
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.Sleepin'.
IP: A6F7 168B
Why y'all sleepin' on a niggas post? I don't rock y'all's minds every damn rhyme? Man, y'all need to up a nigga more, makin' someone leave RB and shit.
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IP: 072B 152E
this was aight. u got an aight flow and sum good vocab but u just not sayin much to me. ya rhyme scheme was quite good tho. dunno wat else to say just work on it a bit. RETURN THE FAVOUR CUZ AND CHECK MINE AND J6F's COLLAB IF I RULED THE WORLD aight 1
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