I was just fucked on a battle becuase of my posts, thats some prejudice shit. So i'm posting both verses up and want you to tell me if i was really fucked or not and what i should do about. Since i'm on tha net i cant literally beat tha fuck out this herb like i want too, but peep tha battles and give me your advise.


Mines...:: cracks knuckles and neck finishes off tha blunt::...

Ayo....

Just like an overated hoe, lettin you know, you blow like a speaker/1
To me your just a speck of dirt on my sneaker, maybe even weaker/2
Your easily touched just not often felt, similar to a beatin child who's never seen a belt/3
You'll be quick to melt, for certain like a million dollar card player smile when he dealt/4
Verified as a minor league player, more weaknesses then an overweight diner fatigued mayor/5
Send your prair never to be reached, next in line to recieve tha title deceased/6
Finally after a whole life of bein diseased, be thankful to me cuz tha chance has just increased/7
Tha vibes you give me are soft and sensative, kind of feminime now that i mention it/8
Some cleanex could remove you, equivelant to wat you use to whipe your fingers with after you prelube/9(LOL)
Mane, i'll evaporate you like grandma's cookin, make you sweat for your meal/10
Have you scratchin and scratchin from anxiety your whole outer layer starts to peal/11
Now lotion goes a lot more fast, now that your usin it for its purpose instead of tools for your ass/12
Reducin friction but your still draggin bricks, leavin you lyrically inclined/13
More stressful then Fuedal Alchol Syndrome and Terets combined/14
Lack of skills, packin dill's(dildo's) in your profile Splivitivus is who'll you'll find/15
Nuclear Weaponz destroyed your terrain, slowly chemical's are dissolving your skelatal membrane/16
Chemical warfare got your brain bubblin ready to pop, your skin turns to liquid till all thats left is a drop/17
Now you can say you literally been strained, tha way you worked so hard and it went down tha drain/18
Frustration and rage gotta be flowin down tha stream, just forget about it pretend its a dream/19
Drift away from your troubles and never come back, abandon your thoughts so your slow to react/20

His

(spliviticus enters war zone... everyone stops fighting to listen)

ahhem...

Everybody take cover while this battle is on
These punches gonna hit ya like a Nuclear bomb
Only Weapon you got is a sick note from your mom
to excuse you from this battle so your life can go on
Your ammo ain't enough, my explosions'll meltcha
I read your last verse, I don't know why they feltcha
Your rhymes are like free food they give out at a shelter
Cause if you wanna beef wit me you'll need a Hamburger Helper
And that shit you talkin might just make me inclined
To beat your face so bad that you'll be legally blind
And if you think I said it just to fill up a line
I'll be givin you a deeper understandin of dyin'
His back is breakin makin him a cripple for lyin
This act your playins faker than a clip-on tie n'
Ima speak da truth dog, wit all due respect
You phony like an addict writin fraudulent checks
They'll call me 'The Riddler' before this battle has passed
Cause I'll make this 'Boy Wonder' how I tackled is ass
Sack the quarterback n make him fumble the pass
TOUCHDOWN!... I'm callin that the 'Runback Blast'
Man I hitcha harder wit my rhymes than I meantah
I beat you wit da mic. It broke n left your ass splintered
Why's it so cold in here, it's like there's a blizzard
Oops, I blew him up n caused a Nuclear winter

Drop your advise, cuz tha votes said he koed me, and that i have no talent with punches lol. This was tha rematch i already beat him once.
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Well he beat you this time. He had wittier punches but when I read your verse, I understood the punches, I just wasn't feelin them cuz they was so verbose and wordy. Plus he had better wordplay, flow, and personals. Shit I woulda voted for him too...