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Old 04-16-03, 03:58 PM   #1
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Diss to dis kid Steve (Eddy)

IP: 5153 3B92

Board one day and he started rymin on me... So i played around a lil bit... hurr it tis::

#1
aight ya mutha fuckas
sit down an listen
tell ya crack head moms ta, git out da kitchen
lay back and relax for dis
lyrical flow about crack
look it everybody, eddies talkin smack
hes sittin in da corner suckin ass and eatin crack
hes a women and wears women undies
haha its funny when i make fun of dis hunnie
whos ya daddy bitch
watch me throw dis pitch and BUST out ya teeth
straight OUT ya pants and wiggle da pussy to sleep
dont make me spit again man
last time i shot up 6 police man
and had to deal wit da guilt
of savin your ass from gettin scared unda ya quilt

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eddie, listen to me mutha fucka
read all the words that i say cuz its the last time sucka
that im makin fun of your chlorine ass
walkin round like yew a tuff guy showin people yew fass
you aint got muscles, your skins ripped like ya pants
gotta get big so ya gurl dont whoop ya ass
liften weights trien to improve ya chess
i'll punch yew in the back and rip da heart out ya chest
and give it to ma dog
i'll punch yew in the jaw
you talkin shit again i'll kick ya in tha balls
and throw ya down in the dirt
like em said nameless
dangerous and herendous i am not one to be played wit
come near and i'll backspace erase it
makin fun of my bitch
when yours is manlier then me
i'll punch her in her knees and give her a vaginal disease
throw a dirty saringe that i got from da trash
im tellin ya dawg im a kick ya ass
no tellin what im gonna do
shits too complicated for you
too many big words you must be confused
im not slowin it down cuz i dont like you
and i aint stoppin till my job is done
my jobs never done so get used to it son
im spittin this shit word after word
ryhme after sentence
goin back proofreadin to fix it
to make you sound like a whore
and givin you time to clean da floor
b4 i put you on it
you must be on it to be spittin me a sonnet,
i gotta notha rhyme stashed into ma bonnet
im not lettin it out unless someone calls for it
im done playin
im done sayin
this shit to a fag who knows it
dont dare come back wit somethin else cuz iv heard it
your retired and you just started
aint that funny cunt you dribblin an studderin
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Old 04-18-03, 08:44 AM   #2
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I Saw This Was Gettin Slept On So I'll Give FeedBack...


There Seems ta Be Some Real Emotion Towards This Eddie/Steve, Which Was Vented In This Verse... Which Is Good But When Ya Writtin a Diss Try ta Keep a Steady Head... Na Mean... Was a Good Verse... Bars Where Bit Small Tho



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