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04-17-03, 11:42 AM | #1 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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The Gun
IP: 44B7 B6C4
Woke up one morning and looked outside/
it was dark and pain was hittin my mind/ there was a documentary on Pac and Biggie Smalls/ got bored, so i decided to turn the tv off/ I found myself in a mystery place/ confrontin the thing that took big and pac without a trace/ he started to say how proud he was when he did it/ I said "why would you be happy, you killed rappers looked up to by kids?""hah i took 'em by surprise thats what i did" I wouldn't be proud to kill another brother/ cuz when your caught its sad to look at their mother/ he said"Please a G like me ain't got feelings/ i taken wounds in my body and im still healing/" But to kill another person, wouldn't be fair/ plus justice is done so be prepared/ He said what can they do to me/ and it showed itself it was a gun with an evil grin/ And then all of a sudden i heard a click and spark/ and soon after that everything went dark...
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04-17-03, 12:09 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: E2EE 59B6
I couldn't really feel this piece to much. Work on vocab .. I also couldn't feel a real flow to this one.
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04-17-03, 02:38 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C2C2 09EB
yeah..was'nt feeling it either, keep elebvatin!
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