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wats good feel like startin dis shit off?

im droppin a verse u betta show or ima takin a win clown

yo

im bout to rack up another victory for tha best on tha screen
1-n-gone musta scared this sorry bitch like 'Wile E' tha hell out tha 'scene' //

its hurts dont it i bet u feel it all up in ya spleen
'hoover' u must really 'suck' damn ima really have to 'clean'//

up after ya mess ya started
ya flos stank worse then whoopi goldberg pussy fartin'//

yo ass gon' have to get 'carded'
ya 'lines' get no 'credit' its basically 'retarted'//

ha my scrips 'dope' like like 'crack' 'fiends' 'blood'//
ya shit gets 'nope' like tha 'mens 'hair' club'//

ur not gonna last long wimpin out on this battle
after this lose u wont 'get' 'up' like tiped ova 'cattle'//

thats it' no mo u can get' u better switch' ya pitch' for im bout' to crack ya career outa tha park wit jus one hit //

not even worth finishin post some shit or catch a L bitch'

UPPIN ^^^^^
someone finds this bitch iced and tell him to take his ass woopin like a man

Yo bitch sorry i didnt get back to ya like that/
I was to busy hitin sum pussy from the back/
You smokin crack boy i may be Wile E but im the star of this show/
Your just pissed off cuz you found out your girl's a hoe/
And are you tryin to come onto me with that hoover quote?/
I'm not a fagit like you in the marines on a boat/
Or in a farm eatin cheese from a goat/
All you bring to the table is shit jokes/
Menthol smokes/
And even so you to afraid to toke/
How can you write your rhymes on a computer? Buddy your broke/
Base ball is for pussies and hoes/
Im stealin pussy from your hoe/
Give up rappin buddy go back to being you average joe/
Tip me like cattle/
After i rattle/
My tail like a snake/
Your gay like a fat kid and i am the cake

uppin VOTES ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

1 N Gone gets my vote cuz the other guy's shit got cheesy, but ya both need elevatin.
vote on my shit vs. albolexx21
http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...8497#post378497

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Both Verses where too short and slow...

Try Makin Your Lines Longer Both Of You!!!

But Other Than That A Nice Battle... Not Anywhere near the best i've seen but ok..

1-n-gone took this with a touch better flow.. but nothin else

i wasnt tryin he was spose to be a no show but oh well im winnin

VOTES!!!!

1 N gone i loved the middle of your shit but i felt like u fell off at the end, thaz what i meant by elevatin, try to keep yo shit strong

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WHO THA HELL VOTED FOR ICE PLEASE DONT VOTE WITHOUT POST'N A EXPLANATION

UPPIN^^^^^

UPPIN^^^^^^^^^

votes!!!

1n got this..no doubt...

ur not gonna last long wimpin out on this battle
after this lose u wont 'get' 'up' like tiped ova 'cattle'//


that was ILL

V-1n Gone

peace

3-2 more votes pweeeeze