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Old 04-16-03, 05:16 AM   #1
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Broken/Heart Of A Man (a DARK rendition of the feelings of a man..Parental ADvisory!)

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BROKEN

Be Brilliant and Efficient, don’t let emotions/
Get attached to women, cause they find men delicious//
From the start to finish, eatin the hearts of men like spinach/
And in this particular instance this chicken Oh! this Princess//
Burned her bridges, left my heart in stitches, in turn the motivation lynches/
On recollections pure, but tainted by this experience which sits my discretion on the benches//
Thus the tears of vast apprehension run/
The ascension of blasphemy ova past shit done/
Quarantine my thoughts and move on to get past it son/
100 cc’s of morphine won’t render the pain numb/
But now I’m refined/
And there will come a time//
When we can sit down and talk it out/
And this is how it would go about//
I would pronounce that now if this bitch is/
Ever to punch my digits to say her pussy itches/
I’ll stick the inches of my penis up her clitoris/
Until I scratch the uterus with the tips of my pubics/
And though my attitude is seamless of anemics/
My rubric for this past relationship was to knock bitch delirious /
Hands up or to the hips the bitch is defenseless/
Unleashin the vengeance of black-fist militants/
The resilience never meaningless and I am so fast with this, the mind cringes/
And so furious with these sentences its like pumpin nitrous in my engines/
And You revved my temperament to gain my attention so I kicked you to the curb/
Florin the tension by questionin my disposition so I put the cleats to the nerves/
Bitch ya ignorance sunk ya boat in my ocean/
Bitch ya dim-wittedness burnt ya toast on my foreman/
And you stay in the grill/
So Ima do you one better still/
Ima apply pressure like smoke grippin tha lungs/
Takin desperate measures relievin the next mans pleasure by straight rippin ya tongue/
My companion yells then implores…Why did you murder that hoe for/
Why did you to put you arms around her throat for…What did you choke her for/
To disable her vocal chords so her voice won’t be heard on the phone no more/
You took the liberty to hurt me and I want you to hurt more/
So I stuck a dildo up your asshole so I wont be ignored/
Store acid in the ejaculator and let it pump until her bones hit the floor/
My passion was burned down to the bone, so Ima burn yours down to the FUCKIN core/
Cause I like the odor of marrow, when I’m scribblin hor in blood across the WOODEN floor/
I told you to keep ya teeth tight/
Now Ima take the noose squeeze tight/
Until her eyes turn pink and vital signs sink/
Leave her hanging by a string in the garbage heap/
Until the mind thinks to follow the stink meltin the nose like a sphinx /
An abandoned physique found with a note written from the blood she leaked and it reads/
I HEARD SCREAMS WHEN I PULLED OUT MY KEY RING/
AND I HEARD SQUEAKS FROM THE BOUNCE OF OUR BED SPRINGS/

666
666
666
Peace means accept the hate within ourselves
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Old 04-16-03, 05:25 AM   #2
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ill shit multies out the ass phatest read tonight good job man heres my faveorite :

Be Brilliant and Efficient, don’t let emotions/
Get attached to women, cause they find men delicious//
From the start to finish, eatin the hearts of men like spinach/
And in this particular instance this chicken Oh! this Princess//
Burned her bridges, left my heart in stitches, in turn the motivation lynches/
On recollections pure, but tainted by this experience which sits my discretion on the benches//
Thus the tears of vast apprehension run/
The ascension of blasphemy ova past shit done/
Quarantine my thoughts and move on to get past it son/
100 cc’s of morphine won’t render the pain numb/
But now I’m refined/
And there will come a time//
When we can sit down and talk it out/
And this is how it would go about//
I would pronounce that now if this bitch is/
Ever to punch my digits to say her pussy itches/
I’ll stick the inches of my penis up her clitoris/
Until I scratch the uterus with the tips of my pubics/
And though my attitude is seamless of anemics/
My rubric for this past relationship was to knock bitch delirious /
Hands up or to the hips the bitch is defenseless/
Unleashin the vengeance of black-fist militants/
The resilience never meaningless and I am so fast with this, the mind cringes/
And so furious with these sentences its like pumpin nitrous in my engines/
And You revved my temperament to gain my attention so I kicked you to the curb/
Florin the tension by questionin my disposition so I put the cleats to the nerves/
Bitch ya ignorance sunk ya boat in my ocean/
Bitch ya dim-wittedness burnt ya toast on my foreman/
And you stay in the grill/
So Ima do you one better still/
Ima apply pressure like smoke grippin tha lungs/
Takin desperate measures relievin the next mans pleasure by straight rippin ya tongue/
My companion yells then implores…Why did you murder that hoe for/
Why did you to put you arms around her throat for…What did you choke her for/
To disable her vocal chords so her voice won’t be heard on the phone no more/
You took the liberty to hurt me and I want you to hurt more/
So I stuck a dildo up your asshole so I wont be ignored/
Store acid in the ejaculator and let it pump until her bones hit the floor/
My passion was burned down to the bone, so Ima burn yours down to the FUCKIN core/
Cause I like the odor of marrow, when I’m scribblin hor in blood across the WOODEN floor/
I told you to keep ya teeth tight/
Now Ima take the noose squeeze tight/
Until her eyes turn pink and vital signs sink/
Leave her hanging by a string in the garbage heap/
Until the mind thinks to follow the stink meltin the nose like a sphinx /
An abandoned physique found with a note written from the blood she leaked and it reads/
I HEARD SCREAMS WHEN I PULLED OUT MY KEY RING/
AND I HEARD SQUEAKS FROM THE BOUNCE OF OUR BED SPRINGS/

good hit man, peep out suicide letter and militant mind return the favor
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Old 04-16-03, 05:27 AM   #3
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whats up ya'll its good tobe back on rap battles and everything...soo you know the drill na mean...post ya constructive criticsm whether it encircles tips, negative, positive criticism, etc....post somethin na mean, peace
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Old 04-16-03, 03:44 PM   #4
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big ups
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Old 04-16-03, 09:11 PM   #5
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hot man, was feeling that flow and wordplay, these some vicious rhymes man... had me reading the whole thing... yo I wrote something like this... but my perspective was way fucking different... good shit man

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Old 04-17-03, 03:26 AM   #6
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big ups
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Old 04-17-03, 06:10 AM   #7
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some crazy shit....malicious...nice wrodplay...multies were disease yo...one of the best drops i have read in this place...enjoyed reading it...respect man...one
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Old 04-17-03, 06:50 AM   #8
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Fucken sick drop, great multies..Makes wanna kill my ex. Full of rage...

Chronic keep dat shit up

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Old 04-18-03, 03:33 AM   #9
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