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Old 04-20-03, 07:56 PM   #1
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Yo, I'm here, so spread the word, I'm tired of these lame raps, it's so obserd, But now at least I got some compeition, That's what I've been wishin, It's my mission, to be the best, to put your abilities to the test, and smash all the rest, I hope you all will put up a fight, cuz I be rappin with all my might, and I just made this ryhme, you can tell I be droppin dimes, hope you all aint a bunch of mimes, cuz I'm tired of seein my flos from the otherday, mineswell sell my raps on Ebay.
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Old 04-20-03, 07:59 PM   #2
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yo a lil advice to signal spots between a rhyme type // ok its easier to read but otha then that good job
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Old 04-20-03, 08:15 PM   #3
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yo a lil advice to signal spots between a rhyme type // ok its easier to read but otha then that good job


..yea what ^^^ said
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