this was my tryout verse...let me get some feedback


i'm unpredictable, not even ms cleo knows what to expect from me
steppin to this, you'll get cut like you work out excessively
i'm the greatest especially when it comes to destroyin someone mentally
i'm endlessly hurlin rhymes with the projectory of the nut from a man high on extasy
what? you expect less from me?
i have the power to crack your exoskeleton
then i'll put an x on yo skeleton
drive a car head on with ya dome and wreck yo intelligence
now theres less thats irrelevant
murderin dudes like i did mad man but i can't stand
when wack cats vote for this wack man
plz! stop the dick suckin this bitch is fuckin
with LunkHead who's known for cuttin a wrist or somethin
of any bitch whos frontin....

Nice.......i liked tha flow...

Holla at me...we need to set up SIG n get more ppl

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uppin for feedback and thanks ruthless

i liked it

anyone else who will give more than i liked it?