Every moment of silence that we hear,
her heart is growing weaker.
So objective, so much anger.
When all she wants is someone to believe her.

Silence is golden they may say,
but to her it's a stone that blocks her way.
Every moment she gets weaker,
when all she wants is someone to believe her.

It dies in her eyes, her soul burns out.
These people think they know what her life is about.
Every moment she gets weaker,
when all she wants is someone to believe her.

The waves of the ocean roll by.
The angels hear her silent cry.
Every moment she gets weaker,
when all she wants is someone to believe her.

Her tears fall so desperately.
She reaches out yet no one seems to see.
Every moment she gets weaker,
when all she wants is someone to believe her.

She lifts her head, the wind blows her hair.
Her soul is scattered everywhere.
Every moment she gets weaker,
when all she wants is someone to believe her.

The darkness surrounds her tender heart.
These memories she holds she dares to part.
Every moment she gets weaker,
when all she wants is someone to believe her.

The yelling, the screaming every night
A life without coldness...not in sight.
Every moment she gets weaker,
when all she wants is someone to believe her.

She cries in her heart, she fights alone.
A shield of hatred has been grown.
Every moment she gets weaker,
when all she wants is someone to believe her.

Her reality is your dream,
pretend is what it might seem to be.
Maybe the world will someday see.

Until then, every moment her soul grows weaker.
The shadow of sadness still fights to seek her

nyce drop i must say, most cats that try to use repetition in thier pieces mess it up and jump around on topics n just end up talkin about irrelivant things, but u stayed w/the topic and madeit easy to read, i liked the flow, good piece, keep uppin

I feel u, the repition puts so much emphasis on her mental and physical state, the use of imagery was good, " darkness sorrounds her tender heart" ill " her silent cry"
your going places shorty, stay up