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Narcelus Flawless
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Probably Too Complex For You
IP: 27EA 5505
Me, myself And I will acheive shelter high, above your helpless skies/
I'll smell the swine shitting out your insides and sleeping in you/ till you become the filthy beast within you/ pity the soul who meets my offspring spitting splitting image of my given whole/ two decades deep, rememberances of my entrance into this endless sentence/ my clock ticks at the pace i walk with, slowly stagnated, half sacred, lock smith/ master of my own akward processed concious/ These heathens pass me by,with their glassy eyes/ masses drafting lies with massive ties to their graphic reliance science defied I/ left divided, a hybrid eyelid blink my liveable pious tries/ with fires beside this tired wire bone skeletal expired sellable buyer of hell/ full of medical swell my heretical spell disembowellement of edible realms/ i eat my flesh and return as the same/ entity tempted and tainted by empty centuries/ painted the stench of me destroys this polluted void that entered me/ since i was loin juice..if i fill myself with thoughts/ will it reach the top, explode and speak to God/ letting go of my peace, the fraud i teach/ father me out this martyred beast i call/ me, myself and I acheiving shelter high, above your helpless skies/ I'll smell the swine shitting out your insides and sleeping in you/ till you become the filthy beast within you/ pity the soul who meets my offspring spitting splitting image of my given whole/ I'm still giving more, and living slow/ will time passes me by like my grasp of life drastically/ i guess it has to be mine, and yours/ skin pores leaking my sins for people ive been before.... |
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
Nope Not For Me..
![]() Dope Shit Bro, I Really Got Into That.. **Reads Again** |
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Narcelus Flawless
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IP: 27EA 5505
thanks N...your shit is complex and i like readin complex verbals...problem is not too many kats in here do though...its all gravy though...good looking out...wahid
check your pms dunny |
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Narcelus Flawless
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IP: C3D0 66BD
uppin
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peace
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
Whoa I Liked This Piece Alot.... I Like The Way The First Part Is Repeated Again Towards The End.... That Shit Was Ill, Seriously..... Do Ya Do Audios?!?
Keep It Up Man |
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IP: 6D3E 6117
dope!!!!whoo - complex.. Nice 2 see sum1s writing shit that means sumtin u no wat im saying - deep . great pik of words. That had me intrested ....
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-Warrior-
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IP: F0BC 2F9C
This was ILL...Realy feelin this right here...
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Narcelus Flawless
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IP: C3D0 66BD
thanks for the replys...and to answer your question methane yes i do audios as well...good looking out...wahid
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Narcelus Flawless
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IP: C3D0 66BD
uppin
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IP: 4D18 261C
shit was ill narc,loved the ending starting htis,shit was deep as the abyss,totally my style nahmean,definite put this on a mic...nice nice nice....
bismillah |
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Narcelus Flawless
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IP: 27EA 5505
Shukran dunny...good looking out...wahid
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Registered User
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IP: 020A 4147
real good use of vocab man, really showed off ur skill and knowledge
one thing i gotta say is i couldnt really get into it, i understood it all none of the words were over my head or nething like that but i just wasnt feelin what u were tryin to put out, neway it was still a good piece that showed a lot of talent return the favor and hit up my post |
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IP: E2EE 59B6
That had less vocab than I'm used to from you.. but it was still pretty good. OoNnEe
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BANNED - Pink Slipped
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IP: 3D8F AF61
good shit was a lil too complex for me, not the ryhmes the meening, goos shit 0ne
everyone puts sum weird languange for close so hola como estas |
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Narcelus Flawless
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IP: 526D AD40
thanks for the replys...that post was about greed...guess i shoulda gotten more complex lol...good looking out...wahid
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