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Old 04-25-03, 01:16 AM   #1
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This a joint formed by me and my twin bro....together we Gemini....i'm Rezen, hes Drow...aight, check it....cuz it fo real niggaz...

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Old 04-25-03, 04:50 AM   #2
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my net fucking up I'ma edit this with a response when I get a chance
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Old 04-25-03, 07:23 PM   #3
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WHoops I peeped the top track. The melody on chorus sounds chessy. All you need to do with the main melody is bring it down a octave it would sound better. The beat is decent though I like it.
The flow is decent mang your delivery could use some work you slurred a few words here and there nothing major. Decent shit though keep working on your ish.


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Old 04-25-03, 08:24 PM   #4
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This was pretty good man, the flow was nice on it. The lyrics was aight man, keep that joint.
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Old 04-25-03, 09:42 PM   #5
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listening.....

it sounds ok, quality is shit though. in the 2nd verse you said nigga to much couldnt you think of anything else?

but your doing your thing,
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Old 04-26-03, 02:33 AM   #6
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yeah i member this beat...sho-down righ

dope shit man...sounds like your playing the beat behind you...learn how to mix in your acapella (with headphones on so theres no background noise) with the mp3 file....itd be even iller...quality isnt top notch but tolerable...i feel ya with what your workin with....good job on the adlibs....dope chorus....down them vocals inthe 3rd verse by about 20%

tight track man

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Old 04-26-03, 03:02 AM   #7
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fo real....appreciate tha feed back, but don't mind tha quality, we did do this wit tha stereo playin behind us, i aint no rich nigga, i do it ghetto style....wun
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Old 04-26-03, 03:04 AM   #8
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no doubt man...

gimme your email addy, i'll hook you up with cool edit ...i can get your shit soundin somehwhat similar to that of studio quality when i get the free time....

you got the potential dawg i'd help
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Old 04-26-03, 06:07 AM   #9
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not bad at all man...feelin it...3rd verse too loud....chorus was nice....qaulity was ok but u'll learn better ways to make it sound good.....all round nice track keep up

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Old 04-26-03, 12:46 PM   #10
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whoa...




me an my bro used to recored shit on cassete tapes...so if we'd fuck up, we'd have to re-record the beat AND vocals...took sooo long...lol



i love your rhyme scheme...multis all over the fuckin place! give this 5 mics just for how ur spitting...hook needs mre stressin i think, like add a few more addlibs, but its hot as hell...

iLL beat, yo dog, this track was definatly a tight listen...
holla man, les pop off a collao...



im fucking with AcidPro4...i'll hook u up with details on coppin that...fa free my nigga!
haha
get at me yo...
oNE...

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Old 04-26-03, 06:16 PM   #11
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yo,thankz niggaz fo real...feelin tha luv, appreciate tha help u offer...my email addy is sauron_5@hotmail.com....get at me...add me to msn messenger or sumthin....aight...wun...
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