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Old 05-20-03, 11:06 PM   #1
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audio battle verse

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Ayo

I beat you once already
so whats you think you got this?
When you purchase your flow online
why do always forget to buy some punches
Im too ill for you so why you even trying?
You denying? hear my audio, it'll leave you crying
You scared of flying, but you are gettin tossed
through a window
And I left this pussy bleeding like I fucked
up his menstrual flow
You say you good in B-Ball, but you dont think I know
You crumple your verse, take aim,
and shoot the trash like a free-throw
You aint me ho, so quit playing Shit
Catchin this L gonna hurt, so find ya self a baseball mitt
Heard your crew R.O.C's (Rocks), you in it? you rhyme like shit (ish)--didnt curse
You aint making a Point in this Thread posting
with a Sewing Kit/B]
My writtens sick, see my pen got H.I.V's
The illest emcee, fuack a joker, I though R.O.C still had
Memphis Bleek


You thought I was gonna no show
But that aint gonna happen man
Cause the only time you Woodwind "Would-Win"
is if you join ya fucking Concert Band
So understand, why ya lines are Streched
like Rubber Bands
AND I SEEN YA STYLE...I THINK YOUR GHOSTWRITER
NEEDS A HELPING HAND
You hurtin fam? Watch how you get served like waiters
you suck in text..so you'd better stick to text like paper
Hes getting Steamed like Vapor,Shit bolding punches
is played out
Thought you made a turn for better, but hit a 360 like your post count
^^360=hes back where he started from...or..he just never got better..duh
Thrown for a curve like Robin Yount,shit,even in text you mediocre
Could'nt Come off in [Strip-poker
is that why your mad Joker?
Square-off and get hit with an exponent
just to prove your Numbers-Up
An ugly bitch, head to long for braids, so he always gets a crew cut
This kids fucked he tried to bite before and got caught
Whos your ghostwriter? Tell him he has to be smart to drop Complex Thoughts
For Joker, this is a complex START, shit you need something easier,
Cause you could'nt Light-it-Up Spittin ya verse on top of a
Meteor
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Old 05-20-03, 11:31 PM   #2
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Man u dont post that here , , you suppose to post it in fuckin audio battles
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Old 05-21-03, 07:06 AM   #3
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yea what he said......................n BASH u got too many posts to quick dawg.............................................. ............................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,., .,.,.just cuse u can afford unlimited internet time lol
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Old 05-21-03, 07:44 AM   #4
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Ummm Dumbheads...He's posting the TEXT of his AUDIO BATTLE to get it critiqued to see whats good and whats not about it...^^Smart Kids^^ Looks aiight mun, flows pretty well and there are some pretty hard lines, with a hard beat, it should go well mun........................Pz..................... .....
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Old 05-21-03, 09:17 AM   #5
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lmao...meadz right yet agian hahah....was aiight drop,like mead said with the right beat the shit would be hot....had some funny punches i thoguht...left his pussy bleeding like i fucked up his menstraul flow ahahhahahahha....that shit was funny dun...


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Old 05-21-03, 09:21 AM   #6
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I'm sorry to hate on this , But it made no sense ,didn't rhyme, I didn't see the flow here at all. I'm sorry but man it hurt reading this.
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