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Old 04-23-03, 12:02 AM   #1
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Unhappy Prophecy

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a modern angel sent from grace//
holes in your chest and blood on your face//
repent from sins blessed by love//
the deadliest angel sent from above//
cascading water on the home front yard//
Power and death dealt you your last card//
blessed by anarchy I've risen for death//
every curse word uttered created my breath//
Sent to punish the evil with the strength of writting//
to worn the world of everyone die-ing//
aremagedon is the final prophecy//
to see what he choose to become of me//
everyone will die someday somehow//
you dont expect it to come then POW!//
the good die young and the bad stay alive//
That's why I'm still here proving myself to die//


I know its short... got writers block towards the end... just something off the top .. OoNnEe
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Old 04-23-03, 12:54 AM   #2
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tis all good angelic,your angel soudns heaps mean and hella destructive,sall good though everyone gets angry nahmean haha.
i dunno where this armageddon is at but if it comes ima kick it in the face or osmehting,ha,nice lil spit angel...

blessed by anarchy I've risen for death//
every curse word uttered created my breath//

i liked that part was nice.
peep my post directions if you get the chance.
bismillah
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Old 04-23-03, 12:39 PM   #3
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^^
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Old 04-23-03, 01:01 PM   #4
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This was nice yo,
put me in a good mood and made me smile,
and if someone can spread happiness, then they deserve props..
so...props on this lol..

keep droppin that dark yet angelic scripts girl lol

peace
'one'
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Old 04-23-03, 03:44 PM   #5
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i dun mean 2 b a hata but u need 2 seriously elevate..really ur style iz played and ya vocab iz elementry:
everyone will die someday somehow//
you dont expect it to come then POW!//
MAYBE if u work harder youll b a betta and smarter emcee!
no disrespecet shawty.
1OnE1
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Old 04-23-03, 06:00 PM   #6
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i liked dis piece,it wuz simplistic but ill @ tha same tyme na'mean?Dont get that happenin to much,u got skillz girl.Stay^
-Avi

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Old 04-24-03, 12:14 AM   #7
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Play obviously you haven't read anything of mine.. lmao.. this is very simple for me. I wanted to try to get back to my roots. If you want vocab and nothing simple lol... check out my other peices. You probably would think I was the webster dictionary. OoNnEe and thanks for the replies.
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