It's been along time...yo yo...check it...

Verbal focus elevatin at speeds of a 2003 Locust//
Hands of time can't hold us, column my lyrics to make a Row-bust//
Smashin punks-in with the ease of splatterin pumpkins//
Dumpin with bulleted words causin vocal chords not to function//
while wack MC's leave armies and the masses at ease//
(words)<-- I clap these with acrobatic organ generated batteries//
who knew that verbal voodoo could erase a gang-star faster than killin Guru//
Flow and throw punches through you, have you screamin Bow-No! like U2//
i'm a single star like Tom Hanks bein a pitcher throw the Cast-Away//
I thank god for Fry-day blaze emcee's and have them prayin to Satan for Saturday//

just a quick 10 lines to introduce myself haha...tell me what ya'll thought...OUT

i thought this was ok
i felt 1 or 2 lines the u2 line
tom hanks line was coo to
feel you could re-word some lines
flow was good for the most parts
some parts i had to read over
but it was just a quick key
so i guess it was a nyce

aight thanks for the comment...and you probaly didn't catch the wordplay correct but it's cool...can I get more responses...OUT

ok, reply to mine too
self-glorification is played... but everything else was on point... except for vocab... grab a thesaurus every now and then... makes you look smarter!

aight thanks for the comments...if you use a dictionary or thesaurus when you write rhymes or spit them...than it's fake and pointless hip hop is suppost to come from you...but thanks for the suggestion...and big vocab dosen't mean your ill...OUT