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Old 04-27-03, 02:44 PM   #1
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W4: Fgee Vs. UnEmceeAble

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Match up: Sunday
Check in by: Tuesday
Verses by: Friday

30 line max.
no hate/dick ryder votes.
no senseless beef.

Good luck.
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Old 04-28-03, 09:39 AM   #2
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this is my second check in.........this will be a dam good battle.....
 
Old 04-28-03, 07:17 PM   #3
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^^^^word....

For your notice: i probably wont post till wednesday or thrusday, i'm busy this week:::::::::::
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Old 04-28-03, 08:26 PM   #4
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yeah thats cool.......i got a lot of shit on too.....just try and make it as soon as u can
 
Old 05-01-03, 12:30 AM   #5
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Alright I got some time to post...so I'ma drop right now:::::

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I’m screwin gangstas all day…So F-gee
There’s no right way to beat me…that’s why you left-key
You try to change sites but after me there’s no re-Ward
You thought you were throwin punches by hittin the keyboard
Fgee’s style is played-out…So there’s no reason to let-him-in
This kid has only been here one month and he changed his title to Veteran!!
I’m Pre-Eating the pre-written verses you throw-up like I’m a bulimic
Don’t get me wrong- this kid drops hot shit…at least when he’s diarrheic
Your verses are so peaceful…but I guess I’m disturbing the calm
Your short on the pussy so you’re in stalls impregnating your palm
You’re the only kid on RB to open up thread entitled “Calling out Mixed-Genders”
Why do you keep posting when your verses only show up as: “Return to Sender”
When you post my verse as yours is the only time you get votes
You could copy and paste the bible but You still aint worthy of any Quotes
“ Forfeit…………………” Quote that bitch- it will still score a blister
You need to get a life, you follow Knightshade around like you’re his little sister
You couldn’t own the game…every word you ever drop is a rental
Your lines aint leavin marks like a box of unsharpened pencils

Over a thousand posts? You act like your membership is gonna expire
You been here as long as me but your title should really say: Retired
Its like you to fumble your part and skip out on your lines at crunch time
So don’t feel bad when my entire verse is the only featured punch-line

24 lines? Good enough::: Match it, Go over, or less, I don’t care



Oh yeah, no beef or anything fgee, we part of the same main-crew so its all left in the battle
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Old 05-01-03, 07:24 PM   #6
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i'll drop 2moro man
 
Old 05-02-03, 01:43 PM   #7
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un-emcee-able cos your lyrics lack capability and go undetected/
no clue of illness, even if sherlock inspected/
coming with more played lines than a parkinson coke addict/
and ur jumping around in verses like a sporadic nomadic/
far from ur static I spit automatic leave ur verse sinkin aquatic/
like kids on their first driving lesson ur left changing gears/
so listen up, consider me an engine-ear the way i construct motor fears/
highly tuned I'll put a spanner in your works, wrench away the win and come in first with this verse, hell I'll kill u twice just to make it a re-hearse/
but hey at least ur goin out a bit wiser, my intellectual verse takin ur IQ higher/
hold on wait.....this dude works in reverse for sure, so I'm makin u twice as dumb as u were before, hope u like ground cos u've just been floored/
crashed and burned like ur CPU just caught flames, left u lookin old, like ya verse is supported by zimmer frames/
with words on ball-point I scrawl lessons, come away victorious quikly cos I split seconds, and with so many ways to kill I found it hard to make selections/
consider this as an english class and take stock, cos I'm punctuating this bitch just to make the fool stop./
typing more unoriginal shit than recycled toilet paper but that’s okay, u couldn't be your own man if u were born on independence day/
man u couldn’t bounce back from defeat if u were made of rubber, sayin otherwise thats like sayin ya moms exclusive to one lover
 
Old 05-02-03, 03:10 PM   #8
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Your verses are so peaceful…but I guess I’m disturbing the calm
Your short on the pussy so you’re in stalls impregnating your palm

That did it for me, That was pure dopeness.
Almost remind me of one of my joints..


Cool battle...


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Old 05-02-03, 03:56 PM   #9
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Thnx TrIf: uppin for votes::::::::::::::::
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Old 05-02-03, 07:14 PM   #10
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"You couldn’t own the game…every word you ever drop is a rental
Your lines aint leavin marks like a box of unsharpened pencils"


some good shit. vote=UnEmceeAble
 
Old 05-02-03, 09:50 PM   #11
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umm..lets see..punches win battles..so that would mean Unemceeable..get my votes..better punches
 
Old 05-02-03, 10:14 PM   #12
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does anyone get word play without the commas???????nah didnt think so
 
Old 05-03-03, 01:04 PM   #13
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uppin
 
Old 05-03-03, 10:55 PM   #14
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uppin
 
Old 05-04-03, 06:37 PM   #15
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Your verses are so peaceful…but I guess I’m disturbing the calm
Your short on the pussy so you’re in stalls impregnating your palm


Why do you keep posting when your verses only show up as: “Return to Sender”

lmao



good battle but Unemceeable had better punches flow wordplay metas similes creativity structure etc.
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